One piece: I can Repel Everything

best one piece fan fic for me with all the wishes that a person wants in it

Horrible grammar. The plot is okay-ish but grammar needs to be corrected.

Another pick and go garbage. Author picks characters he wants in the mc's crew, and doesn't even bother to justify why they would want to join. >Mc comes >"Want to join me" >Character joinsNo thought put into this whatsover. I sugges having this retard's hands chopped off so he could never pollute the world with such garbage again.

This is an mtl translation rewrite. The author does not mention this, which is suspicious. Anyways, the mc is the same as cn version. Only practicing and female crewmates come to admire him. No changes but better grammar.

i expected a read ...but a mtl Chinese novel iIget...

I may be wrong but it's an LTM, the story as far as I read is nice and the plot is constantly advancing which is satisfying, it looks like the MC was able to destroy an island so I assume it will be strong

cant repel thots so already looking like a fake op mc

The story is average at best. The plot is nothing new but has a lot of holes and grammar really needs to be fix. The main problem comes from the MC himself. He sprouts all kinds of nonsense in order to justify his actions and somehow other character believe it despite how ridiculous he sounds. Things just happen because it does and the mc really tries to justify it. From the formation of the crew, it turned into nothing more but just a harem. Their is no depth in the character, just power and women.Overall nothing but the usual self insert oc character who is strong for the sake of being steong and having many women join him without any good or believable reasons.

Plot wise it seems fine but more depth would be nice you could go into the thoughts of the people he recruits as well so the readers can better understand why they made their choices. The writing format needs fixing, the grammar needs work, and you could do better on word choice as well as using the correct gender pronouns.Character design is lacking for the main character because his thoughts and reasons for doing what he does aren't really explained nor his exact his strength and ability development level.Update stability remains to be seen ( I won't actually judge it before 100 chapters so I'll give an average score) World background is one piece since it's a fanfic and all so average score here as well

I really try because it looks interesting, but most of the time all I do is try to understand what I just read

It’s great. And if it is Mtl can you give the name of the raw??

Kaya ? Makino ? Karmen? Nojiko? This is pirate not Cruise ship....... It's boring to make a hero look cold or ruthless and yet save anyone in front of him or create a stupid reason to make him help them. Doflamingo and his crew are more important and useful than that king and his daughters Don't make him look more like a hero than a pirate, that's disgusting

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I was thinking and I want your opinion that they think about uploading chapters on Sundays on my part I can, no problem on my part so leave me your opinion here.

The story is good but his spacing suck, if your listening to this Mr. writer please move the sentences closer together It really hard to read it like this.

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Why did you quit Please continue writing

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Your grammar could use a lot of work. It’s a great story on how strong guy progress to become more stronger. It’s enjoyable to read a little as the main protagonist goes on adventures to fulfill his goals and gather like minded people to help fulfill their own goals as well.

The story is good, there are problems with the writing in the first chapters, but it seems that the author realized this and later on he solved it, the plot is easy to understand and there are few characters that can present a danger to the MC so he concentrates on creating a strong crew.