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GuDaoistBigbro
GuDaoistBigbroLv141yr
2023-10-14 02:19

i expected a read ...but a mtl Chinese novel iIget...

One piece God of Space.

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3.3
91 Chs

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PRIMORDIAL_09
PRIMORDIAL_09Lv4

best one piece fan fic for me with all the wishes that a person wants in it

11mth

Stray99th
Stray99thLv13

Another pick and go garbage. Author picks characters he wants in the mc's crew, and doesn't even bother to justify why they would want to join. >Mc comes >"Want to join me" >Character joinsNo thought put into this whatsover. I sugges having this retard's hands chopped off so he could never pollute the world with such garbage again.

1yr
Celestial_Kaiser
Celestial_KaiserLv4

Horrible grammar. The plot is okay-ish but grammar needs to be corrected.

1yr
Qwerttipper
QwerttipperLv4

This is an mtl translation rewrite. The author does not mention this, which is suspicious. Anyways, the mc is the same as cn version. Only practicing and female crewmates come to admire him. No changes but better grammar.

1yr
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

I may be wrong but it's an LTM, the story as far as I read is nice and the plot is constantly advancing which is satisfying, it looks like the MC was able to destroy an island so I assume it will be strong

1yr
DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

cant repel thots so already looking like a fake op mc

1yr
Garland
GarlandLv4

The story is average at best. The plot is nothing new but has a lot of holes and grammar really needs to be fix. The main problem comes from the MC himself. He sprouts all kinds of nonsense in order to justify his actions and somehow other character believe it despite how ridiculous he sounds. Things just happen because it does and the mc really tries to justify it. From the formation of the crew, it turned into nothing more but just a harem. Their is no depth in the character, just power and women.Overall nothing but the usual self insert oc character who is strong for the sake of being steong and having many women join him without any good or believable reasons.

1yr
killersoul
killersoulLv13

Plot wise it seems fine but more depth would be nice you could go into the thoughts of the people he recruits as well so the readers can better understand why they made their choices. The writing format needs fixing, the grammar needs work, and you could do better on word choice as well as using the correct gender pronouns.Character design is lacking for the main character because his thoughts and reasons for doing what he does aren't really explained nor his exact his strength and ability development level.Update stability remains to be seen ( I won't actually judge it before 100 chapters so I'll give an average score) World background is one piece since it's a fanfic and all so average score here as well

1yr
razz_lee
razz_leeLv3

I really try because it looks interesting, but most of the time all I do is try to understand what I just read

1yr
HOLY_BOB
HOLY_BOBLv4

It’s great. And if it is Mtl can you give the name of the raw??

1yr
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