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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv31yr
2023-08-23 02:37

I may be wrong but it's an LTM, the story as far as I read is nice and the plot is constantly advancing which is satisfying, it looks like the MC was able to destroy an island so I assume it will be strong

One piece God of Space.

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3.3
91 Chs

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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

I mean MTL***, I don't know why it's wrong if I remember writing it right 😂

1yr
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Silentfairy
SilentfairyLv4

Maybe cause you are machine translating your thoughts😆

Gabichu_Yeah:I mean MTL***, I don't know why it's wrong if I remember writing it right 😂
1yr
11
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

Surely, it happened to me many times before, I'm sure I wrote the message correctly but when I look carefully I find that it actually seems to be written by a drunk person 😂😂

Silentfairy:Maybe cause you are machine translating your thoughts😆
1yr
5
mow
mowLv4

The synopsis was enough to clue one into the fact that it was MTL

1yr
8
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

I don't see the difference between this synopsis and those of authors who are not from China, I think you simply want to contradict me but oh well 🤷

mow:The synopsis was enough to clue one into the fact that it was MTL
1yr
mow
mowLv4

Contradict you? Im agreeing with youbwhile also saying that I could tell it was chinese/MTL work from the grammar alone.

Gabichu_Yeah:I don't see the difference between this synopsis and those of authors who are not from China, I think you simply want to contradict me but oh well 🤷
1yr
4
dankoku
dankokuLv4

nono, the dude was right, I could tell it was MTL from the synopsis alone. Comes as a trait of reading thousands of MTL novels.

Gabichu_Yeah:I don't see the difference between this synopsis and those of authors who are not from China, I think you simply want to contradict me but oh well 🤷
11mth
2
kunichan
kunichanLv4

what is the title of MTL ?

11mth
ScarletQC
ScarletQCLv14

Even with just the title you can tell

dankoku:nono, the dude was right, I could tell it was MTL from the synopsis alone. Comes as a trait of reading thousands of MTL novels.
7mth
Other Reviews
PRIMORDIAL_09
PRIMORDIAL_09Lv4

best one piece fan fic for me with all the wishes that a person wants in it

11mth

Stray99th
Stray99thLv13

Another pick and go garbage. Author picks characters he wants in the mc's crew, and doesn't even bother to justify why they would want to join. >Mc comes >"Want to join me" >Character joinsNo thought put into this whatsover. I sugges having this retard's hands chopped off so he could never pollute the world with such garbage again.

1yr
Celestial_Kaiser
Celestial_KaiserLv4

Horrible grammar. The plot is okay-ish but grammar needs to be corrected.

1yr
Qwerttipper
QwerttipperLv4

This is an mtl translation rewrite. The author does not mention this, which is suspicious. Anyways, the mc is the same as cn version. Only practicing and female crewmates come to admire him. No changes but better grammar.

1yr
GuDaoistBigbro
GuDaoistBigbroLv14

i expected a read ...but a mtl Chinese novel iIget...

1yr
DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

cant repel thots so already looking like a fake op mc

1yr
Garland
GarlandLv4

The story is average at best. The plot is nothing new but has a lot of holes and grammar really needs to be fix. The main problem comes from the MC himself. He sprouts all kinds of nonsense in order to justify his actions and somehow other character believe it despite how ridiculous he sounds. Things just happen because it does and the mc really tries to justify it. From the formation of the crew, it turned into nothing more but just a harem. Their is no depth in the character, just power and women.Overall nothing but the usual self insert oc character who is strong for the sake of being steong and having many women join him without any good or believable reasons.

1yr
killersoul
killersoulLv13

Plot wise it seems fine but more depth would be nice you could go into the thoughts of the people he recruits as well so the readers can better understand why they made their choices. The writing format needs fixing, the grammar needs work, and you could do better on word choice as well as using the correct gender pronouns.Character design is lacking for the main character because his thoughts and reasons for doing what he does aren't really explained nor his exact his strength and ability development level.Update stability remains to be seen ( I won't actually judge it before 100 chapters so I'll give an average score) World background is one piece since it's a fanfic and all so average score here as well

1yr
razz_lee
razz_leeLv3

I really try because it looks interesting, but most of the time all I do is try to understand what I just read

1yr
HOLY_BOB
HOLY_BOBLv4

It’s great. And if it is Mtl can you give the name of the raw??

1yr
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