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The story is good, there are problems with the writing in the first chapters, but it seems that the author realized this and later on he solved it, the plot is easy to understand and there are few characters that can present a danger to the MC so he concentrates on creating a strong crew.

The story is good, there are problems with the writing in the first chapters, but later it improves, the development goes, so far, well, it can improve even more, but it is already going well.

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