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zaid_khemiri
zaid_khemiriLv17mth
2024-08-27 23:00

Kaya ? Makino ? Karmen? Nojiko? This is pirate not Cruise ship....... It's boring to make a hero look cold or ruthless and yet save anyone in front of him or create a stupid reason to make him help them. Doflamingo and his crew are more important and useful than that king and his daughters Don't make him look more like a hero than a pirate, that's disgusting

One piece God of Space.

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91 Chs

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