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Love at First Kiss

Auteur: poziomowiec
Urbain
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Synopsis

Greg moved to America after his heart had been broken by his only girlfriend. He had the option to work from home (as an anonymous streamer) but all he did was reminisce about his first and only love that had been with him for only a short while. The day before an interview to TBC Company, he saw an accident and not thinking Greg rushed to the scene to save any survivors. That’s when he saw an Sophia walk out of the car and faint. Since his phone was dead he couldn’t call an ambulance but he could at least offer mouth to mouth resuscitation. He didn't know that he took her first kiss and she inadvertently fell in love with him. Will Sophia repair his broken heart and restore his faith in love? Join the roller-coaster. ------------------------------------------- cover is not mine 2 chapter a day 8:30 and 18:30 GTM+1 mass realese(5 chapters) depend from views: 100k - done 250k - done 500k - done 750k - done 1kk - not done .... there will be shown mature content- before it I will be warning on first words of chapter

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Chapter 1First meeting (1)

It was a day before Greg has an interview in 'TBC company' he wanted to look good because he needed the money and all his savings was almost gone.

He has 190 cm of high and 130 kg of weight most of the fat, not muscles, so someone could say that he is good-looking but not himself when he looks in a mirror only words that he says is, 'how ugly I am and who would like me' he starts saying to himself this phrase in age 15 now he is 26 and nothing happened well in his life.

When he thinks about savings, he remembers his first love 'why I need to suffer after that women' he thinks, and then he remembers his heavy heart broke he cries again it happened to him often. He is a person who loves with a whole heart.

When he comes to the USA, he has only $5000 good that his best friend's family was there, and they know a little about his story about first love thanks to them, he found a cheap place to stay. After a few days, he found some part-time job in fast food, but he needs to end this job fast after saving some money he needed to found a better job to his qualifications he hasn't suffered his four years in university to this time go away.

A few days ago while surfing on the internet he saw the announcement that they need someone at 'TBC company' who knows some language from the eastern part of Europe and because he was from there, he knows most because they were similar, so he could apply to it. The best thing for him was that they have night work time(he was a night person so good for him).

It was almost 22 when Greg wanted to take a shower and clean his long hair but after taking out his clouds he saw that there was no shampoo 'f*** me why I again forgot to buy it time to move my fat ass to shop and buy it ' he said loudly. Good, that he has some 6sence to cheap shops. After he moves to his place, he found it after looking for cigarettes. He needed to spend 20 minutes of the walk and a little run he found a shop was still open.

"Sorry, could you wait I only need to buy some stuff," he said handshaking the owner of the shop

"Ok bro go quickly I need to look after PL results it was a heavy day and I haven't had time to look at the" shop manager said.

"Some surprise was a today little spoiled, but I don't tell you who lose, but I lose at coupon."

"OMG that first time that you lose, so it must be big to fail well that on this week my wife told me to not take a coupon on PL."

"Good for you, I lose $10" Greg laugh it was his first loss this year.

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they know each other form bar that Greg go some weeks ago to watch football match it was World Cup final France vs Croatia its end 4:2 to France, but he was after Croatia after a goal from Pogba he wanted to drink some beer, but then he remembers that he has alcohol problems and his liver will not take any alcohol anymore and then a flashback of past weeks of his life shows up in his head

after drinking heavily for a few weeks he wakes up in the hospital and the doctor said to him

"young boy you need to stop drinking your liver suffers a lot because of you and your addictions to energy drinks and now alcohol,"

"ok doc I will remember to not drink again" he answers and after that day he hasn't touched any of that drinks

After that short flashback, he takes apple juice and drinks with another. Some of them were happy another sad, but everybody knows that the game was good. After the world cup, he meets him sometime on weekends during games of PL, and they become friends even don't know the names they start competition who is a coupon win.

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After buying some water, cigarettes (during walking he saw that only 3 left), shampoo (most wanted to think, but he almost forgot about it) and some food he pays and starts going back slowly to his flat.

'Time to listen to some good classic rock and think what I want to say at that interview good that my CV is uploading, and I need not edit it now' he thinks

after the second cigarette, he doesn't know when he starts, but he smokes it he was close to his flat where he stays.

'I again start smoking like dragon good that after a shower I don't go outside' (he has some rules about smoking only going outside no smoke inside flat or on balcony-thanks that he smokeless).

When he has around 5 min to the home, he hears a Rolls-Royce Ghost that was coming close to him with after passing him the driver lost control and hit to three.

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Table des matières
Volume 1
Volume 2
Volume 3
Volume 4
Volume 5
Volume 6
Volume 7
Volume 8

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  • Mise à jour de la stabilité
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PsyberRose
PsyberRoseLv12

Looking at the reviews here, and the comments in the novel, there isn't much I can really add on which you are not aware of. Writing Quality: I know English isn't your first language, and that you are making an effort to imrpove but it really is very hard to read. Structurally, it is all over the place as you have so many ideas jumbled into one sentence. I do implore you to do these basics: (i) Use Grammarly. It is free and very useful (ii) Break down your sentences more. (iii) Proper punctuations (full stops) and capitalize. You have to start somewhere, and just slowly get used to the basic grammar writing before doing other things. Story Development: The progress and things that happen are good. You have so many ideas that it makes the story interesting. It has SO MUCH potential. However, if people are unable to follow it due to the inability to read smoothly, a rough gem will never shine. You need to polish it so its shine can be seen. Character Design: The ML and FL are believable. You can understand the ML stone heart and the FL naivety when it comes to falling in love. Keep that up. It is good. I am sorry I cannot give you 5*; I believe in being honest. Only the stability of updates get full marks whereas the rest needs lota of work. All the best, Author.

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You MUST work on editing your story. I'm sorry for the low rating but I couldn't get through the first chapter as there are uncountable grammar and syntax errors. English is my third language but I do my best not to make mistakes in my writings. Please take this into consideration, nobody will carry on reading your novel it you don't work on the mistakes.

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please find time to fix the use of english word the story is good but the editor or writer made some mistakes in using english words just my opinion I don't want to offend you but what I'm saying is a fact I hope you can continue your love of making novel take this as a practice

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hartpeler
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read for first 20 chapters already. as an aspiring author myself. I don't mind about the grammar issue so much as I'm pretty technical to the level that I could tolerate 7th language English level. but the problem is on the paragraph breaks. if you're writing fantasy. then it's normal that you have a lengthy narration / conversation quote. but this is the romance genre where everyone reads it as "loving story". consider to fix your paragraph. made it max 5 sentences/paragraphs or 3 sentences/paragraphs. world background wise. you need to improve it as I see that you're using the heavy narration, try to change world building from narration to conversation .it will works 4/5 for the determination of the author to write despite of no one seems reading on it.

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Anaya_s
Anaya_sLv5

Nice Story.... You are doing so well 😍😍😍.... Author.... Keep it up.... We will support You...... 👍👍👍...... Mass Release.... Plsss.... 🙏🙏🙏

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otel
otelLv11

Awesome full of sweet moments. The scene is also enviting to read. What made me interested are the chapters are arranged from 2 different point of views.

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natifiti
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Wow very interesting u are such a good writer keep it hope. it's really nice reading your book.keep the good work rocking.love from me to you 💋💋💋

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ReadingAlchemist
ReadingAlchemistLv11

This Story is decent but the poor grammar and languahe are ruining the book. The author stated several times to edit it but he doesn't and instead he focuses on publishing daily. I deopped the story after a short while so I can't say much about it, but the way she falls in love with him is poorly described and just states "love at first kiss" but it was kinda obvious, after all the title states it. All in all if the author really improves the quality of his writing, it should be a good read though .

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Seem like an interesting story. Would love to know whether he also fall in love with her? Hope both will find happiness with the right person.

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I'm sorry I couldn't give you all five star, I highly recommend this book. It's exciting and fun to read, update release is excellent and everything else. With the exception of the Grammar, if you can get past that, then you would love this story. Give this Author some love and add it to your library for future, editing of the book. You would love their story.

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