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2021-05-28 20:13

please find time to fix the use of english word the story is good but the editor or writer made some mistakes in using english words just my opinion I don't want to offend you but what I'm saying is a fact I hope you can continue your love of making novel take this as a practice

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it is a completed novel and to edit I know I need to do it, but (around 150 chapters I can't edit) I have other novel rn publishing which I'm focusing on, and if I would focus on lafk, it will take me around 40h or more to edit all that is there

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