Fate/False Order

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Fanfiction Review: Fate/Fake Order by Hugh Janus “Fate/Fake Order” by Hugh Janus brings a fresh, lively spin to the Fate universe, centered around a dynamic new protagonist, Alastair. Alastair is openly and proudly gay, and his unapologetic personality adds a compelling twist to the high-stakes world of the Grail War. Hugh Janus has crafted a protagonist with depth and flair, making Alastair feel both relatable and unique within the context of the series. His witty, charming approach to the challenges he faces makes him a refreshing departure from the typical Fate mages. The story does an excellent job highlighting Alastair’s personality beyond his sexuality. Hugh Janus skillfully avoids stereotypes, instead building Alastair as a well-rounded character whose confidence and wit enhance each interaction. His flirtatious nature brings humor, especially in his banter with other mages and servants, yet there’s an emotional core to his character that adds layers to his journey. The bond between Alastair and his servant is one of the story’s highlights. Their relationship is beautifully written, evolving from cautious respect to a genuine partnership. Hugh Janus balances tension, humor, and heartfelt moments to give their dynamic a natural feel, making their journey together impactful and memorable. The action scenes are another strong point. Hugh Janus brings the combat to life with vivid, detailed descriptions that capture the intensity and strategy characteristic of Fate battles. The lore is expertly woven in, showing the author’s respect for the source material while adding their unique twist. Overall, “Fate/Fake Order” by Hugh Janus is an engaging read for Fate fans. Alastair is a memorable, fully realized protagonist whose story is as thrilling as it is heartfelt. Hugh Janus’s writing makes this fanfiction a standout, blending action, humor, and heart into a genuinely entertaining experience.

As there have been 16 chapters as of right now I thought I should do a review. •Let's first talk about the main character.He is well written and I like his personality that's all. I don't know what to say if you want to know more just read that fanfiction. • The secondary characters, the author really brings out the characters as they are originally interpreted in Type-Moon. It's enjoyable reading them as they have their own unique character. • Update--The author delivers the update as his promise. He didn't miss a single one as of it yet. ......................That's all..................... ~★Now sum of my personal thoughts on the two FML subjects I really hope that you make this a single female lead as I haven't read it any good fate FanFiction in years. If you do make this a two-female lead fanfiction, do give a heads up so I don't get disappointed so much. I want to say that I really enjoyed reading this so far.★~

Awesome, as of now. We need more Fate Fics, and this Fic is one i believe we needed more so than most others. On a Side Note: Author, please continue as you do right now, and please don't drop this peak

Bro please keep writing this and don’t drop it. The world is deprived of good Fate FF’s.🙏

A story from the GOAT, will for sure be great

Absolute Cinema, need I say more? I think not. If one hath reached this mountain peak in an attempt to comprehend thy peak, then one shan't be disappointed. Thy Author comprehends thee lore. Thy Author comprehends thee power system. Thy Author comprehends thee personalities, and not only that-but exhibits them in an exceptional fashion. Standeth proud, upon thy peak. Thou holds a magnitude of strength.

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I personally recommend this fanfic to any fate fans out there as the author knows his lore and characters. So far it’s been an amazing read and everything felt natural and not forced (Plot). Looking forward to more updates, Good job, you’ve cooked👨🏻‍🍳🔥👌🏻

IF U WANT BIGGER MEAT 😉 Because i know us degenerates need all the inches we can get. All u need to do is read all chapters. I could not believe my eyes, my mighty pole had increased by a whopping 4 inches 😱 NOW, the old mighty glories being that is I, have passed the threshold of 5 inches and achieved Nirvana. I do no longer need to look at my little PP through a microscope, GLORY TO THE AUTHOR

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A good ff that shows a lot of promise, well written characters and overall plot as of Vol.1 Ch15. Looking forward to see how the story continues to develop

In all honesty, One of the best books I've read on this damned app. As for writing this, A book like this is a damn gem that you won't find elsewhere. Give this author nothing but love and damn support because holy shit, He can cook. Although, The mc in this book does kinda piss me off for some unknown reason. Besides me being a cunt, the author can write one hell of a story.

I would say it is quite a good fate fanfiction. High quality with zero grammatical mistakes and big chapters. Author-san I hope you don't drop this fic. Well done, fan of your work.

Excellent,the author mostly keeps the update calendar and the few exceptions he still manages to keep the quota of chapters,it has an excellent quality of writing with a very good character development and demeanor making it fit to the world and the magus society;the magecraft its a version more explored of what one can see in Fate/zero and stay night,because the mc's magecraft develops very well in a pragmatic way instead of the typical magus that focus on research and weird effects that takes lots of preparation or the crazy bastard of fate/zero(aka kiritsugu bin laden emiya) with a rocket launcher and a gun that only knows how to use his magic crest,reinforcement or basic magecraft;the author creates interesting parts that always makes one want to keep going and the lenght of the chapters is excellent and the author is always in contact with the readers and answer kindly to any question or complaint taking seriously your opinion

reading this work I get the feeling of a Chinese novel but about england. ( leaf juice lovers )

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There is really not much to say. The author has extensive knowledge of the nasuverse and can come up with his reasonable fanon without creating any plot hole is respect to the og canon. Very enjoyable to read though I suppose that a new reader starting the novel might be bored in the first 4 chapter and feel like there might be some unexplainable things bit they are all wonderfully explained in the later chapters. And rember to watch the advertisement breaks.

The story is very good, although I feel the protagonist is a little weak at the beginning, later on he improves a little. I hope the story continues to improve from now on.