Absolutely amazing Fate fanfic right here imo. Nearly flawless grammar and writing quality, engaging character interactions, well-planned plotlines, and extremely detailed (and basically flawless lore-wise) world background. The fight scenes are also very well done and quite exciting. Hell, the Author even replies to paragraph comments quite regularly! The only real demerits to the entire story for me are that the MC is a bit childish (being dumb, reckless, or arrogant in some cases but not too bad) and that the romance is REALLY slow. I stopped reading around Chapter 44 (to let more chapters build up); but up until that point there is almost no romance at all. There is definitely a good foundation for romance in the future; but it has been really bland in that department so far. This is definitely not a story for someone looking for fast paced romance. The Author also seems to lean towards having a single love interest — too bad Harem fans. Despite the lack of romance and some childish behavior by the MC, this is still one of the best Fate fanfics I've read personally. I'll definitely be coming back to read more after a surplus of chapters build up and possibly update or post a new review. Until then, keep up the good work Author and bravo.
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LIKEAh~ Thank you for the long and detailed review, too few do it, and I love the feedback. I do agree with you that this is a slow burn on the romance side, but I myself am not a huge fan of fast paced romance, so that is in large part the reason, so I am a smidge sorry on that. Something something about how slow and steady wins the race… or some such garbage. It just feels it’s more gratifying when there is some work for it. And on the whole childishness thing, I can begrudgingly agree, but I’d call it him being eager, or at least that’s what I’ll tell myself to sleep at night… Anyways, am incredibly happy that you have been enjoying the fic so far, and I have that you will continue to enjoy it when you hopp back on!
I will forgive you this once about the romance *nods imperiously*. Either way, I'll definitely be coming back; so keep up the good work! XD
Leylin_Blackwood:Ah~ Thank you for the long and detailed review, too few do it, and I love the feedback. I do agree with you that this is a slow burn on the romance side, but I myself am not a huge fan of fast paced romance, so that is in large part the reason, so I am a smidge sorry on that. Something something about how slow and steady wins the race… or some such garbage. It just feels it’s more gratifying when there is some work for it. And on the whole childishness thing, I can begrudgingly agree, but I’d call it him being eager, or at least that’s what I’ll tell myself to sleep at night… Anyways, am incredibly happy that you have been enjoying the fic so far, and I have that you will continue to enjoy it when you hopp back on!