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Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv43mth
2024-08-23 02:30

As there have been 16 chapters as of right now I thought I should do a review. •Let's first talk about the main character.He is well written and I like his personality that's all. I don't know what to say if you want to know more just read that fanfiction. • The secondary characters, the author really brings out the characters as they are originally interpreted in Type-Moon. It's enjoyable reading them as they have their own unique character. • Update--The author delivers the update as his promise. He didn't miss a single one as of it yet. ......................That's all..................... ~★Now sum of my personal thoughts on the two FML subjects I really hope that you make this a single female lead as I haven't read it any good fate FanFiction in years. If you do make this a two-female lead fanfiction, do give a heads up so I don't get disappointed so much. I want to say that I really enjoyed reading this so far.★~

Fate/False Order

Leylin_Blackwood
5.0
48 Chs

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Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

This is my longest review to this date and sorry for the late review.

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Leylin_Blackwood
Leylin_BlackwoodAuthor

I’m happy for the review, and I’ll have you know that it’s still planed to be a single FML, though I am up to consideration for more than one, given that I am given a good enough argument, to have more than one, along with support for more than one FML, as I am rather flexible if given a good enough reason. But thanks a lot for the review, and am happy that you’ve enjoyed the story so far!

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Leylin_Blackwood
Leylin_BlackwoodAuthor

Now that's dedication! But then I must ask, who are you rooting for? Or do you wish for it to be someone else that will pop up later down the line?

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Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

Leylin_Blackwood:Now that's dedication! But then I must ask, who are you rooting for? Or do you wish for it to be someone else that will pop up later down the line?
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Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

Leylin_Blackwood:Now that's dedication! But then I must ask, who are you rooting for? Or do you wish for it to be someone else that will pop up later down the line?
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Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

Leylin_Blackwood:Now that's dedication! But then I must ask, who are you rooting for? Or do you wish for it to be someone else that will pop up later down the line?
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Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

Leylin_Blackwood:Now that's dedication! But then I must ask, who are you rooting for? Or do you wish for it to be someone else that will pop up later down the line?
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Leylin_Blackwood
Leylin_BlackwoodAuthor

I think I know who you're routing for...

Azathoth2:
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Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

Leylin_Blackwood:I think I know who you're routing for...
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Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

Still I Don't care who the female lead is as long as this stays single female lead fanfiction.

Leylin_Blackwood:I think I know who you're routing for...
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Aedolf_Heathlore
Aedolf_HeathloreLv13

why not take altrouge and Morgan as the fmc so he can have 3some

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Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

Nah bro, I'm monogamous

Aedolf_Heathlore:why not take altrouge and Morgan as the fmc so he can have 3some
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KorutoV1
KorutoV1Lv2

Only Morgan please my waifu of course she is the best!! Altrouge is also good i could accept two of them but no more please no stupid shit harem

Leylin_Blackwood:Now that's dedication! But then I must ask, who are you rooting for? Or do you wish for it to be someone else that will pop up later down the line?
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Guy85
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Leylin_Blackwood:I think I know who you're routing for...
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