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2024-11-06 02:24

Excellent,the author mostly keeps the update calendar and the few exceptions he still manages to keep the quota of chapters,it has an excellent quality of writing with a very good character development and demeanor making it fit to the world and the magus society;the magecraft its a version more explored of what one can see in Fate/zero and stay night,because the mc's magecraft develops very well in a pragmatic way instead of the typical magus that focus on research and weird effects that takes lots of preparation or the crazy bastard of fate/zero(aka kiritsugu bin laden emiya) with a rocket launcher and a gun that only knows how to use his magic crest,reinforcement or basic magecraft;the author creates interesting parts that always makes one want to keep going and the lenght of the chapters is excellent and the author is always in contact with the readers and answer kindly to any question or complaint taking seriously your opinion

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Naw <3 Thank you for the review, my good sir! I will take your compliments, and use it to fuel my superiority complex! I hope you have a nice day, and I pray that you continue to enjoy the Fic!

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