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Avatar Legend Of Korra: Two At Once

Auteur: some_writer
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Lisez le roman Avatar Legend Of Korra: Two At Once écrit par l'auteur some_writer publié sur WebNovel. Kai was transmigrated into the Avatar World, where bending the elements was a common sight to see.But Kai was incredibly special, incredibly might not be even the right word because it's too small to ...

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Kai was transmigrated into the Avatar World, where bending the elements was a common sight to see. But Kai was incredibly special, incredibly might not be even the right word because it's too small to describe his circumstances. Watch as Kai becomes the strongest in the world and maybe create a small harem for himself in the process.

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WebReaderPub
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Legend of Korra world is set in a period akin to our industrial revolution, but in this fic there are some sci-fi tecnologies like holograms, which doesn't make sense, since a big part of canon is based on the invention of much more basic tecnologies like planes or the first camera. Moreover MC has a part of raava inside of him because his grandfather touched aang during the 100 hundred years. So practically MC has become a second avatar because of that and can bend more elements. I don't like the chenges author did to the story and i never liked the second avatar development either.

Sir_Squirrel
Sir_SquirrelLv4Sir_Squirrel

how the heck does this have such a high rating? i mean yeah the writing quality is pretty decent, and the story has potential, but literally just in the first chapter alone there were numerous plot holes and giant leaps in logic, it's like the author was just too lazy to fact-check his fic with avatar source material and wrote the entire base of the plot line on a complete whim with no sound reasoning behind it.

Greenbeem1
Greenbeem1Lv14Greenbeem1

Not enough korra fanfics out there and the ones that do exist aren’t finished. Author I checked it other stories and ur reliable. Can’t wait for the rest of the story. Also keep the harem small. Maybe korra and Asami only would be nice

Random_Entity
Random_EntityLv4Random_Entity

Great! Another Avatar fanfic. Wish there were more Legend of Korra fanfics though.

AlexCyberHeart
AlexCyberHeartLv2AlexCyberHeart

5/5/3/4/2 mixed up steampunk with sci-fi other then that military operations are rarely as lax as shown so far are borderline incompetent with no backup even if MC did the raid right, improvement is a bit too fast and MC shouldn't know that he can bend other elements even if the way things played out they way described and even if he can it should be extremely hard for him to learn bending outside of fire given it is a small enough piece that nothing was affected while it might help him learn things like lava, lighting and varients I would say that make it so that it would be better to learn fire bending with minor abilities in other elements at best with a boost to variants.

Hayai_Kami
Hayai_KamiLv3Hayai_Kami

Its a Great fanfic so far wich means not much at the moment because it only has 2 chapters, but it has a Great and awesome Concept. I Like it and will Watch how it goes. I recommend to give it a try. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] I Need more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3Kono_Timoda

Mid It's not complete trash, but the writing style needs to be refined. I can definitely see this getting traction but I don't like how hollow the story feels. Plus it doesn't feel interesting to read 🤷🏽‍♂️ like he's an avatar, big whoop, although it had a nice backstory though. I would say. It's more a 3.9 - 4.2. aka amateur writing.

shukry_9394
shukry_9394Lv1shukry_9394

Author take sample watch chinese anime fog hill of five elements is you has time is not just watch youtube fight scene that help you writing idea 😎

hamidking0099
hamidking0099Lv2hamidking0099

Excellent and unique work, good and comprehensive storytelling and balanced power system, the best fanfic available, Avatar with power, keep it up, you're right, Avatar, make the latest windware, and continue the Naruto fanfic.

Dead_matter
Dead_matterLv4Dead_matter

Don’t listen to the hater enjoy writing “your” story the way u like it btw this is awesome 😎

Weizenbrot14
Weizenbrot14Lv4Weizenbrot14

Révéler le spoiler

dradeity
dradeityLv3dradeity

I would hate if you drop such a promising story

Daoist796063
Daoist796063Lv3Daoist796063

Yes, this has a future, so far (Ch7) Mc's fights and personality are good. I hope he has a good development in romance too. pls dont drop author

Abi_Usus
Abi_UsusLv13Abi_Usus

yes yes thank god with you as an author I know it will come out great please don't stop if you can make a fanfiction with X-men evolution it would be great

Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4Dark_PersonJJ

Your writing is good, you just sometimes make to much changes, mostly with genderbending.

Austin_oates
Austin_oatesLv15Austin_oates

pretty good keep it up please...........

pp_pp_pp
pp_pp_ppLv2pp_pp_pp

god, this fanfic just doesn't get it, just like netflix's adaptation it b*stardizes the world so much. boring system trope, annoying 'mc is avatar' trope, weird technology insert for the author's convenience... at least the update is pretty consistent, and the writing's pretty decent, with some cringy phrases here and there... i feel like avatar fanfics are cursed man, i only found one that is somewhat decent.

DaoistmSWYR5
DaoistmSWYR5Lv3DaoistmSWYR5

Нормальный фонфик, персонаж адекватный и это только начало Так что не буду судить строго. И если автор не забросить эту идею мы увидим больше

Darith_Sky
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