how the heck does this have such a high rating? i mean yeah the writing quality is pretty decent, and the story has potential, but literally just in the first chapter alone there were numerous plot holes and giant leaps in logic, it's like the author was just too lazy to fact-check his fic with avatar source material and wrote the entire base of the plot line on a complete whim with no sound reasoning behind it.

Not enough korra fanfics out there and the ones that do exist aren’t finished. Author I checked it other stories and ur reliable. Can’t wait for the rest of the story. Also keep the harem small. Maybe korra and Asami only would be nice

Great! Another Avatar fanfic. Wish there were more Legend of Korra fanfics though.

5/5/3/4/2 mixed up steampunk with sci-fi other then that military operations are rarely as lax as shown so far are borderline incompetent with no backup even if MC did the raid right, improvement is a bit too fast and MC shouldn't know that he can bend other elements even if the way things played out they way described and even if he can it should be extremely hard for him to learn bending outside of fire given it is a small enough piece that nothing was affected while it might help him learn things like lava, lighting and varients I would say that make it so that it would be better to learn fire bending with minor abilities in other elements at best with a boost to variants.

Its a Great fanfic so far wich means not much at the moment because it only has 2 chapters, but it has a Great and awesome Concept. I Like it and will Watch how it goes. I recommend to give it a try. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] I Need more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Mid It's not complete trash, but the writing style needs to be refined. I can definitely see this getting traction but I don't like how hollow the story feels. Plus it doesn't feel interesting to read 🤷🏽‍♂️ like he's an avatar, big whoop, although it had a nice backstory though. I would say. It's more a 3.9 - 4.2. aka amateur writing.

Author take sample watch chinese anime fog hill of five elements is you has time is not just watch youtube fight scene that help you writing idea 😎

Excellent and unique work, good and comprehensive storytelling and balanced power system, the best fanfic available, Avatar with power, keep it up, you're right, Avatar, make the latest windware, and continue the Naruto fanfic.

did you delete your stories? or no, cause I'm confused on what happened