First of all, I was really happy with the FL's character design. Tbh, I thought she'll be cold and serious because of her rebirth just like her initial attitude due to her past experiences. It was a good thing that her personality isn't like that and I'm very satisfied with her character design— OP, narcissistic, willful, arrogant, but she's still kind. She's not saintly, yes, but still, she's very good and will still help anyone as long as she can.
I don't have much anything to say about the romance aside from I also love the ML's character design (well, actually I think I really like the characters' designs). Anyway, the ML fell to the "wolf-turned-puppy-like" category. He's obviously powerful but coquettish when it comes to the FL.
Above all, what touched me the most is the FL's relationship with her sect. I like all of them so much but it was a pity that only few of the martial siblings were mention like Su Yin, Su Jiu, Luo An, Su Yize, Lin Ling, Lin Feng and some are just mentioned by rank or profession but not named like Eldest Senior brother and the senior brother who's an archeology bigshot. Anyway, their interaction in their past life really made me cry. Especially in Jiu'an's funeral.
Meanwhile, I have a mixed feelings about Jiu Chi and the Huo family. I want to hate them but I can't as I also found them very pitiful. Jiu Chi was used, however, it still made him hateful as he caused Jiuan's suffering .But he sacrificed his power, eye, and life just to atone for his sins and he's very cautious that he's so pitiful that's why I can't hate him. Then the Huo family always anticipate their little princess' arrival but because they believed that warlock, they lost her completely. The side story if the exchange didn't happened made me regretful as well as I think, that version is also very good. But their ending in their past life made them really unfortunate since it cannot really be considered as their fault. Anyway, both of them are really tragic but I can't also criticize Jiuan since she really suffered.
Lastly, the story is very good and although I'm a little regretful because of the lack of details with the wedding (as I'm imagining the funny scenarios it can cause but only to found out it wasn't detailed), I'm quite appeased with the side stories. However, the translation kinda ruined the emotions in every chapter because I feel bothered with the misused of pronouns. The translation quality is 5/10, I guess. It's bad but not too bad that it's not understandable anymore. It's just that aside from the pronouns that used wrong and sometimes names are directly translated like Jiu Chi into Nine Scarlet and Mu Qing into Minister Mu, or sometimes the names aren't translated very well that it's just repetitive (e.g. Lin Ran, Huo Xuoyuan, Huo Chenqi, etc), the chapters are still understandable so it didn't totally ruined the whole story.
Anyway, overall, my rating for this is 8/10. If the translation is good then perhaps 9.5/10