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chanduy
chanduyLv33yr
2021-12-05 13:58

wonderful plot but boring narration and too slow paced story. story do not move at all, all the fl does is to eat and roam with her friends. how her ffriends take care of her and that is it. zero face slapping in 165 chapters i read so far. there is zero movement in the story. the narrative style is boring too. there are a few scenes where it can be fun to read but author made them too boring. i hardly felt any excitement or good while reading. ml is good but i can't keep up with the boring narration so i am quitting it.

The True Young Miss Is A Spoiled Boss

Li Xiaoning
4.6
833 Chs

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LORSLv12

hmm thanks for the review it help me to not waste my time

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This books really is a gem. The MC had a pitiful past life. When she reborn, she just wants to be happy with her Master and senior brothers. But the way author describe the character emotions and situation was really beautiful. You can immediately immersed in the story and can fell Mc's sad and painful past.

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I have read it. i dont know if i like it or not. i have been tearing up from chapter one.😭😭 The female lead is really pitiful 😫 Its just sad

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peeyatotz
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Reveal spoiler

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Jean_Fere
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I am 230 chapters in and man I am sorry I started this, it's pure stupid soap opera. We are talking about the revival of Dallas levels of stupid. The first hundred or so chapters are pretty much throw away. The only things that happen are she dies in her first life and is reborn. No spoiler you knew that from the synopsis and it's the first 3 chapters. Then she meets her family and ditches them. After that the novel descends into a snails pace of building background for no particular reason.. Despite all this vast swathes are left blank while the novel diddles around with things like her getting her hair cut. After awhile it moves on to start making some progress and when it does it's just a giant a$$pull. No spoiler but by the time you get to the 200s you will be hitting your head on your desk.

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96 chapters in... story has a good plot & FL is as usual an omnipotent but story lack spices[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins]

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did i just read a hidden treasure? the story is well written that i cried only by reading a single sentence. this isn't like your ordinary reborn-revenge-something. i really like it. kudos to the author and to translator for giving so much soul in it 🥲♥️

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Lavvy
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The plot of the story itself is quiet good, at least it's not as cringey as many other stories on Webnovel. However the translation quality after ch. 300 destroys the entire reading experience. Names are swapped, pronouns are interchanged from she to he, from they to you, overall the grammar is soo bad that once it meant as if the FL is going to give birth to her grandfather (ch.371). I wouldn't have criticised the translation so much, had the novel been a free read, but when you have to pay literal money to read such trashy translations, it feels really annoying.😡 Expected better from a platform like Webnovel, though the recent translation quality just keeps disappointing.

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Lavri
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I like this because it's very realistic. The MC is very human and is capable of showing emotions and weakness. BUT it's getting reaaalllyy Boring. All she does is play and hang out with her senior sisters and brothers. Like, I know that's also important buuuttt There's no action or drama at all so yeah it's Boring AF

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peeyatotz
peeyatotzLv14

At first, I thought this story was similar to the one where the FL had rebirth and so was her older brothers but she stayed with them. That was a little boring that's why I was skipping this. But when I read it, it was waaay different. And the FL here is very interesting and intelligent. I really liked the smooth storyline. And am looking forward to this one being picked.

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