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System Creator

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Hey guys, don't worry, the novel will start from 20 December with an official schedule.

I wanted to tell you guys about my other works.

The first is a Fanfic of narutoXdragonball. This is my first novel so there are hell of a lot loopholes. Even I admit that, but its a fun read if you don't cringe by the fact that Shinobis are also strengthened by ki and their powers grow exponentially.

The name of the fanfic is - Dominating With one Intent.

If you want just a fun read, then you can check it out. There are already more than a hundred chapters in that particular novel and more coming after my exams are finished.

The second novel is quite a recent one and also my little darling. While I consider my first fanfic as my treasure, it still up to my standards after my thoughts broadened up about various psychological issues and stuff.

In this second novel, I want to portray a smart and 'anti-hero' mc who is selfish. By anti-hero, I don't mean a straight out villain like fang yuan of reverend insanity. Don't judge me, I love Fang Yuan's character and am a big fan, but his character won't be suited in my story.

The second novel is about dungeon and Cultivation with a 'dubious' system, you will know when you read it.

The name of the second novel is - Dungeon Life - A Pervert's Dream or you can search DLPD.

And yes, They are both HAREM Novels.

Thank you for listening to my ramblings.

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**Brutal Mode** Engaged Starting a story is easy! Just drown the reader in so much info dumping and exposition that they can’t possibly escape! Once the reader is stuck, then trap them in a series of MC weak to strong building and ass-kicking of arrogant masters. They will never escape then and will be forced to read the rest of your story. . Originality - 0/5 - It's a cultivation novel. No, wait! It's a System novel. Why not throw in naruto fanfic while you're at it? Oh LOL he was watching Naruto! Close enough. Wait Wait. Let me guess his cultivation system will be based on Dragon Ball? That will be the trifecta of Webnovel fads. Please ascend. Story - 2/5 There is a story. There is. This is not a paper on a system cultivator, is it? Am I reading one endless monologue? I am sure this story would be great if I could get past this wall of text hiding Mount Tai. Characters - 1/5 The characters speak to me. Literally. The MC rarely speak to someone else, unless its a cardboard cut out cliche. Parent, Grandpa. Quite literally named Grandpa trope so the author doesn't have to show anything about him to the reader #shortcut #efficientwriting. The reader will know from all the other copy and paste novels who use Grandpa. Teacher - angry and hates MC. Why? Who cares we need people in authority to be irredeemable illogical antagonists so the hero MC can make them look like fools in a few chapters. Flow - 5/5 The flow is excellent. I enjoyed reading this exposition. The Authors note explaining the yet to be introduced system was perfect. Why let the story show the system. Just tell the reader and yeah Authors note works perfectly. Btw When does the story start?

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