Rise of the Horde

Great idea for a book, Especially the reason for the behavior of the orcs. I hope there will be more detailed dialogues with other races (In one of the chapters after thanks from .... they disappeared from the book) I also hope you will change his Chinese name to orcish

THIS BOOK IS AMAZING. Why? The story telling is great, It makes you feel like your in the movies. There is little to no grammar errors. The only downside is NOT ENOUGH CHAPTERS :,( This is a diamond in a rough book.

Its unexpectedly really good. It has kingdom building like Release that Witch, but without harem so far and more detail on the war scene. I heard multiple point of view from human race will took too many chapters. if its interesting like Overlord, it will be nice.

he made a decent orc till meeting first human girl... proceeds to simp out over her cringgggggy cuteness and that's where i'm out shame..had potential

One of those books where the world is created for the MC. The system is there to give him items to solve any hardships. The people are obedient and submissive to him. Everything happens too quickly without any attention to detail. Im getting edgelord vibes from the MC, so I’m gonna call it quits and leave this review.

Author here... can't help but shamelessly promote my work...hahaha...what can I do but to be shameless........................................

Starting of the story is quite good. I thought he would make full use of system. But he rarely uses system, under the pretense that the system may not be permanent. Some battles are very long description ( literally boring) and some battles were not even of MC side, they were battles of other kingdom ( nearly 10 chs of single battle of that kingdom).

better not read it's disappointing, It's an orc tribe yet he names his army like those lame chinese name and there ar more but you can decide after you read a few chapters. It's almost good but author keeps me disappointed with his plot.

I did like this Novel and thought this has Potential.....but then there was chapter 20 and completely ruining the Novel becouse how out of character Mc is and how cringe it was

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Just my two cents here but it was a pretty decent story. That lasted until he met a female human, where he proceeded to throw away the last 19 chapters, his backstory, his brain and his b*lls all so he could bend over backwards for this girl as if he's a 12y/o who just got introduced to p*rn.

I like this novel but the author is very stupid. I know that he doesn’t want to rely on the system but he can learn magic from there. Where is the strengthening magic? If you don’t want to add aoe spells, it’s okay. The points are just piling up and he isn’t using any. Magic can’t be taken but you can use it like practice make perfect. You are just nerfing the mc. Where is the magic desolation scroll? Nicely written story but adding too many Chinese ideas about needing the mc is just plain stupid.

The chapters are long. The grammar is good, with little to no mistake, but there is something always missing in each chapter. Basically, even though there is a lot things of happening on the chapter, I always feel it's quite boring. IDK if it's just me(?) or maybe I am just burnt out.

✌️✌️✌️....Needs more polishing but it has plenty of actions on the first chapters...the history of the MC is blurred...the synopsis got me....i thought it was a translation

Chapter 20. Mc is a cringe Female Human simp. That did go from a Military Person to Brainless teen. And yes Mc is of course a chinese what else did I even expect from this😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

It's a really good read, plenty of action in the first few pages! My only criticism is the fact that there is barely any info on how he died or what his life was before, hopefully it will be sooner than later.

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It's a cross of Wuxia and Lord of the ring-ish world, the rules are nicely laid out as if you're also inside the system. Can't wait to read more of the chapters.

awesome idea and had a wonderful start but as time moves on in the story we rarely get more about the actual plans for his kingdom and him gathering resources like I would like to see. the battles seem to take way to long the most recent ones against the barons especially is getting old fast.