PheonixRising41

Wasn't Hu Tao extending the bridge?

I'll be the voice of reason here and say he really needs to punish her. What if she did that while normal people were around and they all got killed? Just sayin.

What's up with this 2nd Person PoV?

Really...

Eh? Doesn't this remove the appeal of his shop then? At that point he'd only be used to sell food and poke balls lol

if that were the case, I'd honestly drop this.

Wut

What

Alright, I have to be honest. Love the story, well mainly the game creation premise. However, I will admit that I've been forced to skip like 95% of anything not involving creation because it makes no sense to me. The story doesn't need to be perfect, this is webnovel, and it is yours but by the ROB it's so confusing when she randomly brings people in for no reason and then doesn't acts like she'll let them walk away if they decide to or betray her. Meh, just had to get that out.

Uh. Only if you're family and even that is iffy.