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Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman

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Revenge is the only thing she wants after knowing the truth. However, is revenge can satisfy her? Revenge for the man and woman that betrayed her in her past life is not worth it. "Wait, where am I? What's this place?" She asks. "This is your space and I'm your guardian." A little boy answered. With this space, she climbed higher in this life. At the same time, someone reached for her hand and said that he would help her. To protect what she needs to protect. ...... The Man: You don't want to have revenge on them? The woman: No. They are not worth it. But if they are looking for death, I don't mind giving them some lessons. The Man: Good. Then you can focus on me. The woman:... ***This story development is very slow. ***The cover image for this novel is not mine. I just edit it. All credit goes to the artist that draws it. *** English is my second language. Sorry, I am sorry if you have difficulty reading my novel. If that is so, this novel is not your cup of tea

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Chapter 1Chapter 1 : The Truth

She was laying down there and looked up at the couple who had also been staring at her. The man was smiling at the woman and the woman also giggled while looking at her. Her thoughts were in a messy state. She really didn't know why she had ended up in this state.

"I really pity you, you know. You really don't realize what has happened to you, don't you?" The woman began to speak. "Really pity." She added.

Yu Qi really did not know what had happened to her. She remembered eating with them but after that the blank memories. The man whose fiance wanted to have dinner with her and the woman beside him. It had been a long time since they met and had dinner with each other. So, she was excited to meet him. 

"Don't need to talk much with her right now. Looking at her face, she really doesn't know about us. Since we are about to finish her, she deserves to know, " said the man.

The woman nodded to the man. '' Yu Qi dear, we are getting married."

The sentence from the woman made Yu Qi's eyes bigger. ' What does she mean by that? Is she getting married? With whom?' The man hugged the woman's shoulder and smiled. Now she knew. 

'But why? He is her fiance.' She stared at the couple.

"What? Why? You..." She could not finish the sentence because the woman suddenly grabbed her hair. She yelled in pain.

"Because he loves me, not you. You just, what people call, yeah, a stepping stone to us. You are the heiress of that company. Has a lot of money, so we can just use your money to help my man. Be happy, you are useful to us." The woman released Yu Qi's hair. 

The man pulled out the handkerchief and wiped the woman's hand that had grabbed Yu Qi's hair. He was very delicate when he did that. Yu Qi never saw he could show this side of him. 'Why? He probably doesn't love me.' She answered that question herself.

"Don't think much because you will never survive after this." The woman was giggling.

"What?" Do they want to kill her? If he doesn't love her, it's okay. She can let go of him and let him marry his beloved. But why do they want to kill her?'

"Many people are happy if you die. Your uncle, your aunt, your cousin, all of them want you dead. We also want you dead. You are an obstacle for us to get what we want. Ah, I forgot to tell you that your grandpa has already been taken care of. Sooner or later, he will be joining you." The woman kept this arrogant look on her face.

"What are you going to do to my grandpa?" She asked. 

"Since you will die tonight, I will tell you the truth. Your uncle's family kept feeding your grandpa a slow-acting poison about 2 years ago. Your uncle has told me that the poison has already destroyed his organs. That's why he has been sick all the time." Yu Qi felt shocked when she heard this news...

This chapter is edited by Dream Spirit and Tzin99

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This review is mostly for the Author and where they need to focus on what to fix with their writing style. Okay, so I've read from start to end (current end Chapter 203, with the ave cost in stones between 4-6 per chapter, which is (VERY) roughly around 5-600 stones in total), and here are my views so far (Warning Spoilers Below!): The Cons: The Grammar is terrible!!! This is a major thing and it needs to be addressed as soon as possible. Every time I see a misspelled word, wrong word or even a missing comma, it ruins the reading experience. It's jarring and disruptive to read smoothly. Your story needs some SERIOUS TLC (tender loving care) with regards to editing! There are also some rather glaring plot holes with regards to the story, mostly involving the time travel aspect. If you're going to play with time travel, you need to clearly and logically sound out the backstory. Simply forcing things to mesh doesn't work for a lot of readers. An example: (I've commented on this before) But the timeline with MC past enemy's is weird due to the fact that they both joined Uni later in their past lives (both around 20-21, that's a 2-3 year difference), but now they've both joined at 18 with no explanation on how this happened. So yes, you can say it's "due to the butterfly effect", but you need to explain HOW this came about. They don't share the shame social circles, nor have they met in this lifetime. So why the enemy female lead is suddenly at Uni with no logical reason, other than "Because!" is silly. The "side villains".... This isn't so much a con on your part, but more of a generalization for the genre you're writing in. Are all the young woman in this world retards? Can't people take rejection and move on? It drives me crazy reading the level of stupidity of this arch-type. It seriously makes me grind my teeth in frustration. Now normally, I should post the "Pros", but seeing as your novel is already highly ranked at the time I've typed this, I feel like you've already nailed down what you need to write. But for future readers, I'll type down a few quick points: The Female lead is a level headed young woman, who is willing to put in the effort to succeed in life on her own terms. Can never say no to cute pets. Female lead can kick ass. That is all.

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