I already liked your "Reality Bender System" fanfic a lot, but now that you've joined two of my favorite anime/novels together, it's really promising. It started a bit slow but with the system update and the regular plot progression I think this story has a lot of potential, hence the 5 stars. Keep it up!

It's starting so there isn't much to say. So far—C16—so good. The background of the MC at the moment is a mystery but I can safely assume that later it will be explained. It will be interesting to see the clash of NazarickVSTensura. The MC's initial power set is cool, I'm not a fan of the plot device known as Gacha Rolls, but I'm not a hater either, so we're cool there. I hope it doesn't turn into one of those Pokemon harems (Not looking at your other story Author -.- Definitely not -.-), I don't read tags so if this is not harem then that's better. Not that I don't like harems, but usually stories tend to overlook or ignore the fact that jealousy is a thing, so even if the story is fantasy it turns unrealistic. Thanks for the story! Keep up the good work!

Good story, amazing character writing. I love this novel very much it has great potential. Tho, I don't like how overpowered the main character is. but still it's a great novel. 10/10 would recommend.

TRUTH NO BS THIS NOVEL EPIC FUN TO READ..THE FEMALE MC IS NOT A MERRYSUE..I HOPE THE AUTHOR MAKES A MASS-EFFECT NOVEL CENTERED AROUND LIARA TSONI AWESOME ALIEN BABE BECAUSE WE NEED MORE MASS-EFFECT NOVEL AROUND HERE..MASS EFFECT NOVLE CENTER AROUND LIARA WITH A SOUL OF MASS EFFECT FAN I LOVE TO READ MORE MASS EFFECT NOVELS..THE AUTHOR LOVE THIS NOVEL THANK YOU.

I helped in the creation of this. I gave the character name.

What can i say its TENSURA ,..............................................................................................................................................

I just found this story and so far think it’s great. I am crossing my fingers 🤞that the love interest is Hinata since there is like zero fanfics out there with her being with a woman and not in a harem with it. I do like your other story too but with season three of this show coming out I have been really high on this train 🚂 lately. Can’t wait for the next chapter and love what you are doing with this. 😊

23 chapters in, and the pacing, writing quality, and story have been consistently very good. Keep up the good work!

All the power ups, new characters and constructs are a good addition to the world of tensura but I think you have lost the sensibilities of fantasy that the canon Tensura has evoked and I fear it is getting farther away, before I elaborate on that it's necessary we discuss the crux of the story, the Lead character. (SPOILERS DOWN THERE !!!!!!!!!) For all the power that Silviana has amassed she has little mastery over it other than 'Morgan' being a mysterious benefactor and plot devices working to power her up through the initial arcs this doesn't necessarily have to be a bad or negative thing because for all I know you might be writing this in your free time. Yet the way Silviana thinks had little else to offer other than worrying about the future like a mundane being does, i.e to say not like a primordial force of time and paradox. (The elaboration*) Cultivation? Elevates perception and base human necessities Technology? It is the progeny of necessity, be it to enhance life or take it. Magic? It is the essence, the mystery that shows the potential to bend the world and also breaks the limitations of self. I do not ask for great feats of reasoning and presentation but somewhere in the story I find myself making the compromise of using discontinuous reasons and self serving emotional intelligence to settle for the Jumble of tricks that the story has become since the Falmuth war preparations. Do not misunderstand me for being anything other than dissatisfied and a bit observant of patterns in the details because if you do misunderstand, then you might not have anything to take away from 'this' which would not serve either of us. What I suggest is for a trait of consistency in behaviour and a holistic world which can serve the sensibilities of the power systems you might put in place inside of a story, anything else and I fear you might settle for less and personally I do not want to be stuck reading mighty writing put to sleep by lack of ambition or foresight. Also, Ainz was not represented well. I know that tempest had to win the battle against Orcs but with the reality bending shenanigans that I see in new chapters and other worldly fiction inspired magics, OVERLORD is no overlord at all if all the purpose he can serve is to pull the 'glorious notoriety of mass murder and evil scheming' - through mud.

RIMURU SAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!