SX? I want more blood!

loch ist Loch

Next chapter at Friday! Let me know if you like it and give me more power stones! It helps to recommend another readers my work.

Many of the comments are good, I don't have much to say, except for the fact that you can write more development with the advantages that already exist, if you add too much to the character and it is not used too much it will be merely decorative. For example, he gives importance to the technology he has, it is true that he should not start any business due to age and realism, but since he has tools such as the computer he could have his own dark web or something like that where he intervenes in different aspects of the world. If you do the time skip it would be better because then people will be more dependent on the internet and its networks with which the main character would have information available

you are 50% right

the same as yesterday, but this time I will not fall asleep :'D

you are free to live, i wish you good luck searching something you like

I didn't really know how to start the fanfiction, I used the first volume to explore and to give my lectors a view of what for a world I want to recreate. the fanfiction itself will follow a variety of protagonist in the story. In the future, I will complete rewrite the 1° volume, well... not all but a lot

It was entertaining while it lasted, please update

bro, you have a nice idea, garp is a great character and it I surely interesting to see how he will grow in Naruto. make the chapters longer and you will succeed. There are many ways to make a fantastic fanfiction in Naruto world like building a new hidden state, making him a teacher, introducing him with a golden list in the future, slice of life type fanfiction would be a nice idea too, I would surely wait for your history.

Next time I will let you know when I decide to change the writing schedule. I used to publish often, now that I got home later it doesn't pay much to write since I don't have time to read. I may be a writer, but I am also a proud reader! Starting tomorrow there will be new chapters

He is a god, but not a strong one.

It will take a while to add the signs, when translating, I removed many of these to make it faster. You know... it's still ongoing. i'll welcome you when you're back . Thanks for the comments .

The fanfic is finally fully translated, support and comment to give me more motivation. El fanfic está finalmente totalmente traducido, apoyen y comenten para darme más motivación.

more please , i don't have more power stones for today . I beg you

but will you continue in Webnovel ? I like the story but I have no money for pantreon

the world government looks dominant. I approve it

I know now what the problem was... the translation works good only from English to another languages. and it shouldn't work on fanfictions too. I must work this weekend, but I will take time for a language change.