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World Development System

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While returning home from a boring day of work, a black hole opened up in front of John and sucked him in. Before he was floating in the blackhole, a helmet latched on to him. "Uploading A.I under progress...Activating Survival Kit" A weird robotic sound appeared within the conscious of John and suddenly a white energy enveloped him... After opening his eyes, John noticed he was teleported to a whole new world. A world of magic and he was a user of a system. Arkon, the world John was brought too, was a medieval world which is 10 times bigger than earth. This new world held many new mysteries and this was the beginning of John's adventure. John will dominate and stir the world with his new system. Old technologies begone and use my advanced techys instead! Ha! you want to hold a politic, economical and military war with me? Sorry but my system is too broken for you all to counter.

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Daoist_Godfiend · sci-fi
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283 Chs
Inhaltsverzeichnis
Volumen 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volumen 1 :The New World.
Volumen 2 :Rise and Fall.

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I understand this is the authors first story but some huge problems with it. First problem is reading story is like reading a instruction manual. Very dry and bland. No simalies or metaphors and all told in third person perspective. The author does get better as story goes on but no by much. Second problem is suppose to be meidevil age planet with magic but they the have bunch huge merchant families and trade of almost all resources witch did not happen until renaissance age. Then have all people pretty much serfs paying 80-90% of everything to nobles who rule them with iron first and most land unclaimed with beasts ruling it witch is dark ages before midevil ages. Then they have stuff like salt petter witch did not come until after renaissance since need advance chemistry for it. Biggest problem is the tech he puts out not even 10 chapters in and he already making factories to create modern guns and steam engines. I don't think author realizes that technology is acumlitive. You cannot build a gun without advanced metallurgy, advanced chemistry, boring instruments, rifling, and 30 or 40 other technologies witch they do not have. Like taking stairs up a building you cannot jump from first floor to the 68th floor without going through all floors before it. There is no possible or way that a world that does not even have technological advancements of cross bows is making guns. Even if you know how to would take month to years just to make all the tools and instruments to make the guns. No less the nitter, coal, steel and other techs they would not have. Don't think author even realizes that people did not know how to process coal till beginning of industrial age. You cannot just use coal how is when mined. Even cooking was so much different. There would be next to no way to make most modern dishes back then cause they did not have stoves.

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ViolenceOfNumbers
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world building is nice, the characters are cool. the chapters are long and are no-nonsense but full of content. other novels are almost half chapters of extra explanations of levels or technics or duel or fights. in your novel fights or duels aren't stretched out 3-5 chapters! each chapter has just enough details and we all get it. we the readers get more story progression in each chapter because of this style of writing.its refreshing. I like this novel. it's an easy read. the ups and downs of a winner in life in another world with a unique system. I some times have an idea where the story is going but that is nothing bad, because you do it well in your own original way. maybe mass update once an while to boost your view & numbers but otherwise good work! Thanks for this story, you earn my power stones! hope you finish this novel, cause I would like to see how he changes that world, the process growing pains and all!! VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!

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