Hua_Li_An
While I'm not big on superhero movies, I am quite fond of superhero books and comics. The author has created an interesting world here as well as a unique plot not often seen in webnovels. I like how realistic the main character is, as well as her interactions with the others. Writing quality is pretty good, save for a few minor errors and maybe some chunky parts, but that can all be smoothed out with a quick edit. Good job author! Keep writing!
It's good story. I will do honest review. One thing I noticed the sentence " Dead become alive and the weak become storng" is repeated to much. It's seem synopsis is repeated in chapter one . And the sentence "my story is a long one ..." Is repeated to. It's a nice story with good concept. More expecting.
This is a narrative of the transformation of a college girl into what would seem a famous and powerful intergalactic individual. The story starts her growth with typical college drama filled with colorful interactions between the cast. I enjoyed how the author described some of the characters' moods making her character start with a strong will despite her immaturity. I do believe the journey of her growth will be an entertaining and fun experience.
Hello to everyone! This is Hua Li An, the author. I'm just gonna jump start my new novel with a shameless review (hahaha bear with me). So a little bit about the novel. First off, it's going to turn supernatural in the long run, but for now, there are still a lot of things the main character, Yassi Anne P. "YAP" Sorento has to face in order to get her superpowers. So, hopefully, you guys, my readers, would enjoy YAP's growth as much as I will. Genres: -Supernatural -Magic -Teen -Romance -Comedy -Terrorism -********* And in the long run, because the world is very large, -Sci-fi -War -More~ So, I really hope people will read my new novel. Thank you so much, and enjoy! <3 P.S. Don't be intimidated by the language-use in the Prologue! The rest of the normal chapters are totally written in modern and quite informal style. This isn't such a heavy novel, and is quite comedic. ^_^