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Reviews of YAP: The Superhero Series

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YAP: The Superhero Series

Hua_Li_An

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The_Procrastinator
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Such a wonderful start to a very entertaining story! I'm super excited about how the plot will thicken from here on out. I really like your writing style and can't wait for more!

LinYang
LinYangLv2LinYang

While I'm not big on superhero movies, I am quite fond of superhero books and comics. The author has created an interesting world here as well as a unique plot not often seen in webnovels. I like how realistic the main character is, as well as her interactions with the others. Writing quality is pretty good, save for a few minor errors and maybe some chunky parts, but that can all be smoothed out with a quick edit. Good job author! Keep writing!

JustLikeWriting777
JustLikeWriting777Lv1JustLikeWriting777

First chapter read! And wow are you doing a great job at it! I love your gripping idea. It's just the type of book I'd like. I hope you publish more. Now,if you excuse me, I'm going to read some more!

deepu_
deepu_Lv15deepu_

Readers if you stumble upon this book please give it a try its worthy.. My dear author your explanation of "The world isn't what it is. The dead can become alive instantly made me love your book.. I read all the chapters and looking for more

Joskylar
JoskylarLv3Joskylar

It's good story. I will do honest review. One thing I noticed the sentence " Dead become alive and the weak become storng" is repeated to much. It's seem synopsis is repeated in chapter one . And the sentence "my story is a long one ..." Is repeated to. It's a nice story with good concept. More expecting.

valiantxvillainous
valiantxvillainousLv3valiantxvillainous

If you're looking for an accurate you can stop reading right now. I'm here to support a fellow author~ I can at least say with confidence that the narration is easy to read and not headache-inducing so if the story/genre is up your alley, please give it a go~

Uriel_Herrera
Uriel_HerreraLv1Uriel_Herrera

This is a narrative of the transformation of a college girl into what would seem a famous and powerful intergalactic individual. The story starts her growth with typical college drama filled with colorful interactions between the cast. I enjoyed how the author described some of the characters' moods making her character start with a strong will despite her immaturity. I do believe the journey of her growth will be an entertaining and fun experience.

Yourguynextscreen
YourguynextscreenLv11Yourguynextscreen

good so far hope to see more seggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggghfbcijkwsallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllheiujrdgbvgbvgbvgbvgbvgbvgbvgbvgbvgbvgbvgbvgbvgbvgbvgbvju

Sicatho
SicathoLv12Sicatho

The premise itself is interesting, and kept me hooked all along the way of the first three chapters. After seeing the prologue, I more want to see how she ends up there, and what's up with the superpowers. All in all, one of the better ameture pieces I've read! Keep it up!

Hua_Li_An
Hua_Li_AnAuthorHua_Li_An

Hello to everyone! This is Hua Li An, the author. I'm just gonna jump start my new novel with a shameless review (hahaha bear with me). So a little bit about the novel. First off, it's going to turn supernatural in the long run, but for now, there are still a lot of things the main character, Yassi Anne P. "YAP" Sorento has to face in order to get her superpowers. So, hopefully, you guys, my readers, would enjoy YAP's growth as much as I will. Genres: -Supernatural -Magic -Teen -Romance -Comedy -Terrorism -********* And in the long run, because the world is very large, -Sci-fi -War -More~ So, I really hope people will read my new novel. Thank you so much, and enjoy! <3 P.S. Don't be intimidated by the language-use in the Prologue! The rest of the normal chapters are totally written in modern and quite informal style. This isn't such a heavy novel, and is quite comedic. ^_^