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Review Detail of Joskylar in YAP: The Superhero Series

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Joskylar
JoskylarLv33yrJoskylar

It's good story. I will do honest review. One thing I noticed the sentence " Dead become alive and the weak become storng" is repeated to much. It's seem synopsis is repeated in chapter one . And the sentence "my story is a long one ..." Is repeated to. It's a nice story with good concept. More expecting.

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YAP: The Superhero Series

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Thanks for the review! And yes, the repetition is actually done on purpose. The synopsis itself was a mixture of the ending paragraph of the prologue and the first paragraph of the 1st chapter! It's nice that you've noticed it. :D