TheGreedGod
Hello Readers! I'm going to give myself 5 stars shamelessly as a tradition. I wanted to write fan-fiction about some anime series which I couldn't decide which one I should go for, so I decide to go with all of them. Starts with Naruto. I hope you guys like it. Don't hold your hands and gift me with power stones. Thanks!
Great overall love the idea love the fact he only has to folow certain types of cannon quests but hell he is going to leave the naruverse anyway and move to other animes and although im not an over op character lover cause it makes it boring im the kind of guy that enjoys when our op mc (and he alredy is op) gets all he should out of a anime and moves on.. you should let him enjoy the shop im just saying the rinesharingan of the kaguya and 6th path is a must before he goes to dbz world or even one piece lets face it even with hashirama kekkei genkai the mokuton he would not be able to beat smoker imagine goku or cell 🤔🤔 think about it bro
since the author is asking for a review here it is please don't be discourage the use of "AND" and "THE" are off sometimes it is hard to understand the stability of updates are so slow and the progression of the story is not that good you should put more fight scenes the MC is a little bit of a retard.. should be more aggressive but not to the point that he kills every person he encounter.. and he should also be able to adapt to the circumstances about the gods.. he himself knows that he is still weak so he should just focus on getting strong and get's all the help he can get.. lastly AUTHOR should get rid of the "CROW" personality of the SYSTEM it just keeps making trouble for the MC with all those information blocking.. A good SYSTEM should not have any personality or if ever there is a personality it should help the "HOST" by not blocking any relevant information that can helps the host in getting strong keep up the good work and more chapter release :)
To sum it all up, basically everyone are a bunch of dumb **** except the MC, all the experiences of adults and smart characters as well as their cunning is thrown out the window and the "schemes" made by the mc is so subpar that it is the same as bruteforcing and you will be left with asking the questions like, "isn't this character smart why is he acting like a retard?" and pretty much fantasy fulfillment.
It's another one of these reincarnated into multiple fictional universe stories. I personally prefer this one to Thick Skin's because things actually happen in this one and the system is atleast 5 times better. The writing quality is pretty bad but my own writing might actually be worse and english is my only language so I suppose it'd be weird to critisize it too harshly. I'm looking forward to one piece arc cause i love one piece.
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