Review Detail of heavenlyundead in Wandering The Multiverse! Saving The God?[Completed]

i am ****ty with reviews but i will tell what is in my heart and totally not because the author is drunk and i am scared he will do something stupid. W Q: The author tries his damn hardest to make sure the story it is a story that even a teenager understand and this makes usage of higher lvl vocabulary quite low and i am pretty sure English is not his first lango. S U: Can't say much more than this is stable af. S D: It is there but sometimes it gets drowned by stories of the worlds he travel too it can be optimized a little bit but not by much cus he is trying travel the multi-verse in a fast fashion if he does it slow we still be in the Naruto section or worse library of heaven's path smacking people's face with books but i will tell you this the main story is one of those slow moving types that you see it's progression in every 10 chapter or so C D: This is where it really suffers from due to the fact it doesn't want to tell the same story and expects you to either know them or just gloss over it. can't really be helped if your a guy who has to hop worlds and really don't know the characters and just wants that world's exotic booty. W B: it already exists can't touch it unless you want to piss of the fanboys. It is a good read for certain type of people and the only way to "fix" it for more general public view is to slow down which is stupid in my opinion this is not a story about guy traveling the multi-verse to meet his fav character this is a story about a guy on a mission to amass as much as power it is available for his own survival.