Review Detail of CZ2128_Delta in Wandering The Multiverse! Saving The God?[Completed]
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since the author is asking for a review here it is please don't be discourage the use of "AND" and "THE" are off sometimes it is hard to understand the stability of updates are so slow and the progression of the story is not that good you should put more fight scenes the MC is a little bit of a retard.. should be more aggressive but not to the point that he kills every person he encounter.. and he should also be able to adapt to the circumstances about the gods.. he himself knows that he is still weak so he should just focus on getting strong and get's all the help he can get.. lastly AUTHOR should get rid of the "CROW" personality of the SYSTEM it just keeps making trouble for the MC with all those information blocking.. A good SYSTEM should not have any personality or if ever there is a personality it should help the "HOST" by not blocking any relevant information that can helps the host in getting strong keep up the good work and more chapter release :)
Wandering The Multiverse! Saving The God?[Completed]
TheGreedGod
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Sticks and stones may break my bones but words will hurt forever. Jokes aside. Thank you for the review. Well, firstly Crow was something I planned from start. He only do those things for the MC, even though it doesn't look that way. There will be some chapters about his behaviour on this matter, but I already dropped to many hint on this matter. I am not that good at writing fight scenes. To not blow up it, I always keep them short, but I will work on them. About the circumstances, he also thinks similar. He want to take all he wants from Gods, but doesn't want to be their lackeys in the meantime. Thanks again for the review.
Nope the crow is not like those old grandpa he just make things worst for the MC.. BTW i really love your story "System:World's Infinity".. going for the sachi route?!?! very nice!!
Oniichan_Thickskin:you mean CROW is like one of those "Old grandpa" from a cultivation novel? ...those grandpas are sometime quite fun to have around.
