Review Detail of Raskaro in Wandering The Multiverse! Saving The God?[Completed]

Well, You know me I'm not a great reader or writer but I shall say what's in my mind, so bear with it a little. For the first several chapters. Story starts nice with a interesting yet familiar concept. Still, after the 7-8 chapters, things starts to feel rushed. His character starts to 'Change?' a little as he grows, that's understandable, but it feels a bit off to me like this change is not suited to Hitomi. Then events start and end with some timeskips and boom, we are done with naruto world. It's not bad but confusing If I were to be honest. For the later chapters, it goes well but something about story feels off, like there is something lacking. Some chapters are not smooth while there are parts that makes me feel like it's rushed. Especially when Templar's join the fray. Story progresses and I can see that there are some improvements but still, It's above average. As for the last 3 chapters, they are quite nice. I mean, there are some little grammar things here and ther that's created when you can't complete a thought completely but they are not that important. It's nice to see you improve and at least I enjoy the story. If I had any advice, then it would be to use Grammarly lesser as if you are completely dependent on it, your pharagraphs or sentences turn a bit robotic or sluggish. Sometimes, you make a mistake but Grammarly takes another word as a mistake to reorganize the sentence. Well, that's it I guess. Still, don't mind my review that much as just like I said, I'm not a great writer nor reader.