Review Detail of CharaDreemurr in Wandering The Multiverse! Saving The God?[Completed]

It's another one of these reincarnated into multiple fictional universe stories. I personally prefer this one to Thick Skin's because things actually happen in this one and the system is atleast 5 times better. The writing quality is pretty bad but my own writing might actually be worse and english is my only language so I suppose it'd be weird to critisize it too harshly. I'm looking forward to one piece arc cause i love one piece.