Reviews of Unrivaled Mage!

Shameless author review. I hope you can support me in the writing contest so that I will know if I should continue writing this novel. Thank you!

(I've read till 115 chapter) Honestly speaking the Mc is the standard emotionless and cold hearted "villain" that does anything for power and usually in the novels where the Mc is a hero we condemn him... but here...I don't know. it's weird. On the one hand you want him to be that way but on the other hand you start question if it really worths it. I mean his achievements feel empty when you compair it to the psychological exchange and the feelings the Mc feel. I always loved these types of characters like Leylin from wmw and lith from supreme magus and you can't help but hype for them since you see that they feel the sense of accomplishment. But here Cairo isn't even satisfied with his accomplishments (it is portraited that he feels it but I just don't get the same feeling as in other novels) which tones down the excitement of the reader too. But still.. it has room for a lot of character development thanks to the doubts that he feels. To summarize READ IT!! its nice if you like warlock of the magus world, supreme magus and the most satisfied reincarnate. I wrote a whole essay I'm sorry!!

Can't wait for more chapters!!😭😭😭😭😭 ...................................................................................................

It only have few chapters but I like it ihdfghjjgdfgffgggggggghhhdsdccvvbbvderyuiihcsscvvvcxfcvbjjjhggfifdddfgvhi?hhhbbhhhhbbxxddddhiiijBBSsaaaagjj

Writing quality- In my opinion the writing quality is readable even though there are a lot of grammar mistakes and other types of mistakes but I dont think that would affect ur reading too much unless ur a grammar grandma. Stability of updates- The updates are fine sometimes they are consistent sometimes they arent but u cant blame the guy he is writing more than two stories. Story development- I think it isn't really going to fast I think the pace is at the level where I can see where it's heading and won't be infuriated u by being too fast-paced that u don't know what's happening. Character design- This one is quite challenging to put into words but the character design for most of the characters introduced is at the level where I won't see them completely as one-dimensional. World background- Unfortunately this is where the story falls short for me, it feels like the author is just skipping most of these steps like explaining to us how strong people are bcuz all we have to go on is, they are really strong and they can easily kill the Main character. If the author took time to set up the power rankings and told us the benefits of each rank in snippets but to help us evaluate how strong they are.

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Simply incredible. From character deVelopment to world building, this novel is perfect. Both the MC and side characters use their head instead of plot armor. So, author keep it up.👍

Great start, looking forward for more chapters! .....djajvdbensjdldjdhshdvvebdjajvdbensjdldjdhshdvvebsisdswryypcksnwbebbdbsnsjdiidiifbrbwmadpfoofjfj

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5 stars for now, I hope that this will be a really gogood novel................................sjhhwjsndvdbskwiehdbbsnsnevebwkwkbdbsbsnsnsnnsns

This only have two chapters yet but I already like it. Another good novel from author!!!!! .............................................

a história é muito lento pra mim. é foca muito em luta de figurantes. e o foda e que dura dois capitulo a mais

The protagonist's charisma is too weak. Other characters also raise many questions. The story is not sufficiently worked out, several times I caught myself thinking that here everything would be different. Stopped reading at chapter 25 because I just got too bored.

A hidden gem that needs more recognition and I truly believe it will get just that, one of my favorites on this site. 111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111

I really enjoy the novel. It’s not my favorite but I will recommend it. I have a hard time with the beginning because the main character is from a poor background but he thinks like a well educated kid but this problem disappear later. The story began to feal more interresting in the later chapter! So if you like ruthless mc and you like magic, read this book!

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The story is pretty good I mean The plot is enjoyable The magic system is decent and The mc isnt that dumb but isnt too smart either I mean i cant really judge The story well as im only at ch 7 while writing this. But there is a single problem that is very bad and thats The grammar. The story doesnt Flow well and The tenses are terrible. So i wanted to ask you author do you fix The tenses as The story goes or is it still terrible.

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thank you. great story so far. keep up the hard work. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I love the MC his smart cold-blooded and fun to read about.t the way this story is written is great the development is fast but still well written