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MMickkWeeb1yrPostedMy thoughts on the story as of 210ch the main character keeps making less and less sense and I have no idea why this happened. Like what changed in the MCs mindset from trying to reach the castle to actually getting into the castle. The mc now randomly has become the punching bag of the story, everyone uses him and now he's even become compassionate to everyone I understand his mindset toward Neph and Cassie but what about the huntress and kai .like how has he become a true idiot in 50ch or whatever. Maybe this was explained in the random 30ch flashback that was probably the worst executed flashback ever so I decided to skip that part of the story. (Like why would you ever do that flashback when we already pretty much figured out what happened why couldn't you just do that random 30ch flashback at the start when it made sense to do it.) When I first saw the cassie and neph personality changes I simply expected them to get killed at the end of the arc as you could see that he was started getting used as a dog by them but at this point, I don't even expect that to happen with how randomly 180 this story changed from mc being a rational cold human being to becoming a (crazy???) punching bag. I guess this storys name is shadow slave but at the same time how stupidly you made their personalities change is absurd. As this shit went from me loving neph and cassie and the trio as it was very wholesome, to me now begging that at the end of the volume they get killed. My last hope is that the plot somehow turns out like soul of nearly but expectations are not high
- MMickkWeeb2yrReplied to MADDY
Lol its not even that bad such a whiny bitch
A flash of white light suddenly appeared and it canceled out the fireballs that almost took Cairo's life - MMickkWeeb2yrCommented
Hope you continued with this it helps The reader understand The story alot better if he knows The dates.
July 1 Year 30,765 - MMickkWeeb2yrPosted
The story is pretty good I mean The plot is enjoyable The magic system is decent and The mc isnt that dumb but isnt too smart either I mean i cant really judge The story well as im only at ch 7 while writing this. But there is a single problem that is very bad and thats The grammar. The story doesnt Flow well and The tenses are terrible. So i wanted to ask you author do you fix The tenses as The story goes or is it still terrible.
- MMickkWeeb2yrCommentedCh 32 I REMEMBER YOU
- MMickkWeeb2yrReplied to Chaossin
But im pretty sure it doesnt matter if its alive or dead it still works so whats The point for The guy to think it would make a difference if he killed The monkey he probably threw The monkey away just so maybe su ming would stop chasing him and he had a chance to live.
Yu Chi struggled furiously for a few moments before breathing his last. Before his eyes lost their life, they were focused on Su Ming and filled with hatred. - MMickkWeeb2yrReplied to Chaossin
Why would you think a random monkey is important alive?
Yu Chi struggled furiously for a few moments before breathing his last. Before his eyes lost their life, they were focused on Su Ming and filled with hatred. - MMickkWeeb2yrReplied to
Wasnt it said that su ming told The guy that he wants The monkey as an ingredient. so he didnt think it mattered to kill it
Yu Chi struggled furiously for a few moments before breathing his last. Before his eyes lost their life, they were focused on Su Ming and filled with hatred. - MMickkWeeb3yrCommented
Did he look like a catterpilar when he tranformed
Yun Jhin was using her body as support when suddenly his good claw went directly for her chest, as she was disoriented she didn't realize what happened until she looked down at her chest and saw his claw sticking through it, Yun Jhin retracted his claw as he transformed back into his humanoid form and opened his mouth, he ate the half crystalized heart with gusto as some of his hidden injuries started to heal. - MMickkWeeb3yrReplied to Jordan_Lockhart
whos nara?
She licked the blood from the blade of the cleaver and moaned as she looked down at the war horses. - MMickkWeeb3yrReplied to Manish_Ra
I dont think abusing a child is right in Any context
I hate my parents and wished I was never born into their family, but what can I say about it? This world is cruel after all. - MMickkWeeb3yrCommentedCh 132 How to [Control] your 'snake'
- MMickkWeeb3yrCommented
Bruh how?
Mike showed a smile when suddenly he felt his phone vibrate, after taking it out he saw that he had received a mission, something about some hostages that needed saving from some rouge mana users that were robbing a bank in southern France, Mike considered this for a few moments before he agreed to take the mission, after all, he had to accumulate enough experience to reach level 7 so he could return to the other world so he sent a message to his servants over the metal network - MMickkWeeb3yrCommented
K got The answer
After dropping for a few seconds they landed hard on the metal floor if that wasn't enough they weren't alone in the room, vermilion haired people quickly captured them at the cost of one of them getting shot in the leg and restrained them before they forced them down on their knees - MMickkWeeb3yrCommented
So did all his servents have Red hair
Mike mentally ordered the 26 servants he had made on the ship to take their positions, they were all [Controlled] and [Evolved] and armed with firearms that were originally being smuggled on the ship, along with that they were also armed with blood crystal knives for close-quarters engagements, Mike watched from his elevated location as the firefight started with Interpol, bullets were being exchanged between the servants and Interpol after an initial ambush by the servants, but as the servants only were 26 they were quickly overrun, or so you would be forgiven for thinking as they managed to pull back just in time to a new as well defend firing position wearing down the Interpol forces making them pay in blood for every meter of port they took, the air was thick with gunfire, the smell of gunpowder and blood blended together as the losses mounted for Interpol until it suddenly changed as the mana users from both the PET and Interpol were put into the field, but after the initial push back the servants quickly retreated to the ship in a orderly fashion without being flustered at all, Mike watched this from above and showed a smile - MMickkWeeb3yrCommented
Big man finally writing about Mc's background
Home sweet home - MMickkWeeb3yrCommented
I always had a question that I still didn't get an answer for how does he look like facial features eye color hair color is he handsome like I know he's fit but that's it and it's kinda annoying trying to imagine him.
The three servants began getting Mike ready for the ceremony, fist the washed and scrubbed his body in the shower before they dressed him in a pure white suit, and did his hair, then he was ready Mike walked out of the room leaving the knife in the hands of Elina since it wasn't really proper to get married while caring any kind of weapon, so the knife rested on a red pillow Elina was holding in her hands - MMickkWeeb3yrReplied to zad1333
Whos The elder ?
"---I also want to get stronger, strong enough to look down on all things with disdain" - MMickkWeeb3yrReplied to MMickkWeeb
Or maybe just hate everyone expect demons
The group soon arrived at the gates and found that there were next to no queue so soon it was their turn to be inspected which passed without issue and while receiving smiles from the guards they were let into the dungeon city of Tursk, once inside Mike asked for direction to the guild and soon they made it there without issue, after dismounting the group walked into the guild, Mike looked around and saw that it was mostly like the guilds he had been to before with a request board and a reception counter lined with pretty receptionists that were busy talking with adventures of all kinds, the male to female ratio was about even and Mike also noted that there were a lot more non-humans here than he had seen on Elmlet, Mike gave a glance at Julie and found that she had a frown on her face as she looked at the non-humans so he gave her a clap on the shoulder and spoke - MMickkWeeb3yrCommented
I guess when she gets her skills envolved again The skill that makes her hate non-humans will make her hate humans. I will see if im right as i keep reading this story
The group soon arrived at the gates and found that there were next to no queue so soon it was their turn to be inspected which passed without issue and while receiving smiles from the guards they were let into the dungeon city of Tursk, once inside Mike asked for direction to the guild and soon they made it there without issue, after dismounting the group walked into the guild, Mike looked around and saw that it was mostly like the guilds he had been to before with a request board and a reception counter lined with pretty receptionists that were busy talking with adventures of all kinds, the male to female ratio was about even and Mike also noted that there were a lot more non-humans here than he had seen on Elmlet, Mike gave a glance at Julie and found that she had a frown on her face as she looked at the non-humans so he gave her a clap on the shoulder and spoke