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DgodRequiem
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Writing quality- In my opinion the writing quality is readable even though there are a lot of grammar mistakes and other types of mistakes but I dont think that would affect ur reading too much unless ur a grammar grandma. Stability of updates- The updates are fine sometimes they are consistent sometimes they arent but u cant blame the guy he is writing more than two stories. Story development- I think it isn't really going to fast I think the pace is at the level where I can see where it's heading and won't be infuriated u by being too fast-paced that u don't know what's happening. Character design- This one is quite challenging to put into words but the character design for most of the characters introduced is at the level where I won't see them completely as one-dimensional. World background- Unfortunately this is where the story falls short for me, it feels like the author is just skipping most of these steps like explaining to us how strong people are bcuz all we have to go on is, they are really strong and they can easily kill the Main character. If the author took time to set up the power rankings and told us the benefits of each rank in snippets but to help us evaluate how strong they are.

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Winter_Night09
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Hi Im also a Novel maker and i would appreciate it if you check out “THE RUNES OF THE PHYTHIX” there are some grammar mistakes in the first 6 episodes but once you reach episode 7 the grammar will be okay.

DgodRequiem
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Sure no problem

Winter_Night09:Hi Im also a Novel maker and i would appreciate it if you check out “THE RUNES OF THE PHYTHIX” there are some grammar mistakes in the first 6 episodes but once you reach episode 7 the grammar will be okay.
Winter_Night09
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Thank you!