Hey author here. As always I'm giving myself a rating. I'm introducing a new type of system in this novel world. A borrowing system. Psst!!!! Here's a spoiler. The MC will borrow items from this system. Don't miss this!!!!!!!

There's so much to cover but I can't spoil it, unfortunately! At first, I thought this was another eastern novel but I was quickly surprised with how fast the story shifted. Writing Quality: Despite the writer's first language not being English, most of the scenes are described quite well. Excellent story-telling and the dialogues are quite realistic. Remember, however, that not everything in a scene needs to be revealed to the reader, like specific locations, numbers, etc. leave a bit of imagery to the reader :) Stability of Updates: Too soon to tell but they seem to be on the right track. Just keep writing every day and try to make deadlines for yourself. My goal is 3 Chapters every day before the afternoon, practice makes perfect. Story Development: If I could go 7/5 I would! As soon as they talked about the borrowing system a few chapters in all I could think about was FMA and FMA: B regarding 'Equivalent Exchange.' I thought that was one of the most interesting concepts to ever exist in anime because the MCs aren't typically overpowered as they have to be creative with what they already have. You can already tell that the MC is crafty and resourceful, so it'll be interesting to see how he uses this new system and for what. Character Design: Excellent work describing each of the characters and making them memorable, from the names to the way they act. Bravo! World Background: I could easily visualize each place they were in, imagery is imperative in fiction and it seems like you know what you're doing -- you're already a ways ahead of your competition. In conclusion, love the book so far, love the idea, and can't wait to read more! P.S. With English being my second language I can totally relate to you as I can see the minor mistakes you're making in your work (imagery, diction, and sentence-structure wise) if you'd like to talk we can exchange discords :)

In most original system novels, you see authors ripping the concept off right from some Chinese original novel. But not this one. As far as I have read, it is original. Even if it isn't, the author handles the situation and system very professionally. Though I am afraid the novel might turn into another of those system protag where the mc is actually the sidekick. But I digress, good novel

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉

this novel is probably one of the most original thought i have ever come upon with regards to themes on systems.. unique and wonderdully written you will never be bored with the way the author narrates the story of wang wei. kudos to you dear author and keep writing!

Don't know much about novels with systems, but I can tell that this is an innovation. The title of the book is both hooking and intriguing. Never seen something similar to it before. The plot seems to have a lot going on too 🤔 The storytelling is quite captivating, and the narrative is enjoyable to read 😊 Liking the character design as well. Overall, this is quite a great work!

Nice cover. From the cover, I already know what the story will be. I already read a few chapters. This story had great prospects, just keep up the good works author.

im not good at reviewing, but here i go. okay, this is a really good read. the MC is very well written, and I love the system in here. I also like how truck-kun was left out, and he's just in the real world with it to help him along. please, anyone reading this, go read the story, you'll like it too.

First off, reading the synopsis already made me excited for the story and I have to say the story doesn't disappoint. Although it seems to start off slow, you are already intrigued about what's going to happen and about MC's character. The writing is simple yet fits the story perfectly. What I like a lot is the dialogue because it sounds quite natural, although I do have to say that author doesnt put comma or anything for the dialogues. However, the world-building shows great promise and the pace flows nicely with the story. An interesting and amazing read, everyone should pick up and start reading!

This novel is about Borrowing System, and this one is unique! The writing is easy to read, easy to understand and has an interesting plot that I came to like. The characters are likable and the flow of the narrative is awesome! The story development is in right pacing, not so fast and not so slow either. Overall, the story is entertaining, a page turner and makes me laugh. Above all a good read! Good job, Author! Keep it up!