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Reviews of Universe Tales: Virtual Log of the Fallen One

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  • Writing Quality
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  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background

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VRMMO_magnutt
VRMMO_magnuttLv3VRMMO_magnutt

Well where shoud I start... The writing quality is polished with finess that I find no major issues with the grammer what so ever... The fact that you added Gore and Violence to a VR novel is very appealing easpecially because I've grown sick and tired of reading novels that pixelate monsters when they die. Its a VR novel with a clutz little girl for an MC.... The character development is brimming with potential with how the MC currently is... The world Building is amazing, I have no stupid critics about it... The fact that it has a lot of universe instead of a single giant continent filled with races is also a very great add. All in All 10/10 keep up the Great work Author..

NotRushifa
NotRushifaLv4NotRushifa

Good story enjoying Maria so far. Kind of love the air headed moments and along with the fact that she is getting the hang of how things work in the game. Love the no romance OP female lead. Kind of wish I can find more novels/fan-fics with female lead that have no romance. Anyways, the world background is great it just gets better the more chapters come out. Maria, herself, is a great character so far. Also, with the side characters have their own character design that you can see throughout the story. Besides Zack I just don’t like him. Stay away from Maria, hmph. Horny little kid. Haha, I wish there was more chapters so I can read more. Keep up the good work so far. Also, I don’t see why there was like 8 chapters, or however many there was, over Maria getting magic. Was kind of unnecessary.

Megumin_Explosion
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zhaderx
zhaderxLv4zhaderx

As expected of Alter! A cute easygoing book that’s easy to read and a fun ride(so far, it’s alter, twist coming100%). The MC is a airhead and super OP, but in a good way. The side characters have nice and lovable personalities and there is potential character growth~ Which the author is rilly good at! Recommend that you read his other book, it is extremely good~!

subhi
subhiLv5subhi

This story is funny and good , the mc adventures is funny and entertaining. It has been a long time since i found a good story like this. So thank you author and please continue writing this story.

kheira
kheiraLv5kheira

Nice,good,nice,good,nice,good,nice,good,nice,good,nice,good,nice,good,nice,good,nice,good,nice,good.maria is a little bet OP.i think.nice,good.

Colby_Trafton
Colby_TraftonLv3Colby_Trafton

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SupremeLank29
SupremeLank29Lv3SupremeLank29

This is really good and I recommend it to those people who like a carefree female mc ......................................................

LifeDestroyer
LifeDestroyerLv6LifeDestroyer

this is one of few stories that i keep coming back to no matter how long the wait, even though it's like killing me slowly... . The storyline is good, the characters got personality , the background of the gaming world is at its finest and the real world is like a secondary objective .. VRMMO at its best can't wait for it to update its like forever ..

RoyalZulu
RoyalZuluLv2RoyalZulu

This is a great book. The story line is the best and the characters are just so funny! I can't wait for it to post more chapters because I am getting increasingly bored the longer I wait without reading this series.

Zoe_Jacobsen_5671
Zoe_Jacobsen_5671Lv1Zoe_Jacobsen_5671

This is a great book. The story line is the best and the characters are just so funny! I can't wait for it to post more chapters because I am getting increasingly bored the longer I wait without reading this series.

Mblaziken
MblazikenLv2Mblaziken

Definitely a fun read you shoukd check out. The only problem for the book imo is the lack of updates, because you always want more. If you think youll like it you probably will.

At3Miemz
At3MiemzLv4At3Miemz

Dark of night and waxing moon come to us a single pool hear us sing our witches' song and send us moonlight clear and strong Earth and water, wind and fire one and all you must conspire to banish bad for goodness sake cos I need moonshine for my cake Weary travelers long ago shared their bread and made a vow that they will be forever friends and so shall be until time ends

ImmortalXuanWu
ImmortalXuanWuLv5ImmortalXuanWu

This is a great novel, but sadly the updates are not many aka there isn't a schedule. Author if you're reading this, even if you post a chapter per week, at least say when you're posting. A schedule matters more than a big number of chapters, at least on my opinion.

Vamirek_Not_Worthy
Vamirek_Not_WorthyLv2Vamirek_Not_Worthy

A great and well done story overall! Amusing and interesting MC? Check! Well thought out and diverse side/supporting characters? Check! Interesting story along with great world development? Check! Overpowered MC? Obviously! Can't wait to see more updates! Keep up the good work! P.S. If you all like all of the things above, I'd recommend checking out Epic of Caterpillar. Hehe, obvious advertising? Check! >_<

SoBreez1
SoBreez1Lv5SoBreez1

The first good VR novel that i have seen in awhile. Good character designs and world building. I your female MC and how her character is developing. Overall a really good VR novel.

HentaiLover2
HentaiLover2Lv1HentaiLover2

Reveal spoiler

HentaiLover1
HentaiLover1Lv3HentaiLover1

Amazing novel, I can't believe I couldn't find it sooner. This novel is really good funny,beautiful,and very good, I really regret not finding it sooner...

_Shiro_Neko_
_Shiro_Neko_Lv3_Shiro_Neko_

Great storyline filled with humor. The author writes amazing battle scenes in a way the reader can under stand. The many jokes intertwined into this novel make it all the better. Great read, I rally recommend it.

Cibblle
CibblleLv5Cibblle

Book is good/funny So far