Reviews of Universe Tales: Virtual Log of the Fallen One

Well where shoud I start... The writing quality is polished with finess that I find no major issues with the grammer what so ever... The fact that you added Gore and Violence to a VR novel is very appealing easpecially because I've grown sick and tired of reading novels that pixelate monsters when they die. Its a VR novel with a clutz little girl for an MC.... The character development is brimming with potential with how the MC currently is... The world Building is amazing, I have no stupid critics about it... The fact that it has a lot of universe instead of a single giant continent filled with races is also a very great add. All in All 10/10 keep up the Great work Author..

Good story enjoying Maria so far. Kind of love the air headed moments and along with the fact that she is getting the hang of how things work in the game. Love the no romance OP female lead. Kind of wish I can find more novels/fan-fics with female lead that have no romance. Anyways, the world background is great it just gets better the more chapters come out. Maria, herself, is a great character so far. Also, with the side characters have their own character design that you can see throughout the story. Besides Zack I just don’t like him. Stay away from Maria, hmph. Horny little kid. Haha, I wish there was more chapters so I can read more. Keep up the good work so far. Also, I don’t see why there was like 8 chapters, or however many there was, over Maria getting magic. Was kind of unnecessary.

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As expected of Alter! A cute easygoing book that’s easy to read and a fun ride(so far, it’s alter, twist coming100%). The MC is a airhead and super OP, but in a good way. The side characters have nice and lovable personalities and there is potential character growth~ Which the author is rilly good at! Recommend that you read his other book, it is extremely good~!

This story is funny and good , the mc adventures is funny and entertaining. It has been a long time since i found a good story like this. So thank you author and please continue writing this story.

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Uhm where should I start... First I really love the personality of the characters mostly the mc. I love airheaded funny characters that charges into stuff. The story development is just right for me, it isn't too slow or too fast and lastly the background of the story whatever you call it, it's understandable rather than random names popping outta nowhere wondering who the hell they were. Overall it's a good novel and a must read if you like characters like the shield girl from itai no wa or mmo type novels.

this is one of few stories that i keep coming back to no matter how long the wait, even though it's like killing me slowly... . The storyline is good, the characters got personality , the background of the gaming world is at its finest and the real world is like a secondary objective .. VRMMO at its best can't wait for it to update its like forever ..

I wouldn't usually rate the story this low because I in fact enjoyed this story a fair bit. I rly liked how different it was to the usual story. Could have used more work but was still a decent story. However, this call changes once she meets the vampire and the series of events that followed. It has honestly utterly destroyed everything you liked about the story. I'm literally astonished, I have never seen an author capable of destroying his own story so badly... The main reason she plays the game is to be with her friends and have a fun time, also to make new friends. This, however, is comply forgot by the author and turned into a story about making the mc god-tier who is hated by everyone turning her into a monster... The very core that is the mc is taken way over the top and then destroyed. There is so much more but I'll leave it at this cause I am honestly still astonished at what happened. Read until the vamp is introduced then I would just drop. That is around chap 60? If want a long binge then don't bother. Buy yeah... gl author I guess?

This is really good and I recommend it to those people who like a carefree female mc ......................................................

Sooo... I really love this book! It has refined grammar, unlike some of the trash tier grammar I have seen from other books with the excuse of English not being their first language. The story development is really good, and we get to see the protagonist Maria go from being a loveable klutz to a mature war goddess. I also really love that when making this VRMMORPG, the author didn't go with the standard 'MC travels back in time, and is poor and gets really rich and knows how the game will go.' I also like how the protagonist comes from a good background, but actually uses it instead of the cliche 'I can't rely on my background.' The world background is really good because it actually makes sense. Usually, you get continents with tons of different species. The idea of having multiple planets and the levels on the planets gets higher is a really smart plan for future arcs. The character design is amazing because the characters are like actual people, and there isn't any 'NPCs are basically humans' garbage. The story development is really good, and I love how the author sets up foundations for the future plots. Overall, a very great book. The only thing I have to nitpick about it is that the update time sucks. I am giving this book a 5 star, but honestly, the update stability deserves a negative review. I heavily recommend!

The story is interesting and comedic as the FL is sometimes dumb but I hope she becomes smarter and has more character interaction with NPCs and her loyal followers. I enjoy the story very much and the writing quality is easy to read and understand compared to some authors who are too lazy to fix their own mistakes ask their readers to fix them. I hope you can upload more or even daily but if you can't just keep it up. Also, you should really start her own religion and church...heheeheh... Anyway overall great novel!!!! (P.S. try changing your novel thumbnail/cover, also how often do you update this novel?, )

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I want more, seriously this novel is just so fun to read!!! It strikes all the good spots, she got over the ''i was eaten alive piece by piece by a pack of hungry wolves'' a little too faast but it's better than making unnecessary drama over it... Need More Chapters!!!

Loved the storyline. Especially all the random quests Maria get's dragged into. The storyline is never dull or boring and when it does, Maria gets dragged into some other shenanigans.

This is a great book. The story line is the best and the characters are just so funny! I can't wait for it to post more chapters because I am getting increasingly bored the longer I wait without reading this series.

This is a great book. The story line is the best and the characters are just so funny! I can't wait for it to post more chapters because I am getting increasingly bored the longer I wait without reading this series.

Definitely a fun read you shoukd check out. The only problem for the book imo is the lack of updates, because you always want more. If you think youll like it you probably will.