Well where shoud I start... The writing quality is polished with finess that I find no major issues with the grammer what so ever... The fact that you added Gore and Violence to a VR novel is very appealing easpecially because I've grown sick and tired of reading novels that pixelate monsters when they die. Its a VR novel with a clutz little girl for an MC.... The character development is brimming with potential with how the MC currently is... The world Building is amazing, I have no stupid critics about it... The fact that it has a lot of universe instead of a single giant continent filled with races is also a very great add. All in All 10/10 keep up the Great work Author..
Good story enjoying Maria so far. Kind of love the air headed moments and along with the fact that she is getting the hang of how things work in the game. Love the no romance OP female lead. Kind of wish I can find more novels/fan-fics with female lead that have no romance. Anyways, the world background is great it just gets better the more chapters come out. Maria, herself, is a great character so far. Also, with the side characters have their own character design that you can see throughout the story. Besides Zack I just don’t like him. Stay away from Maria, hmph. Horny little kid. Haha, I wish there was more chapters so I can read more. Keep up the good work so far. Also, I don’t see why there was like 8 chapters, or however many there was, over Maria getting magic. Was kind of unnecessary.
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As expected of Alter! A cute easygoing book that’s easy to read and a fun ride(so far, it’s alter, twist coming100%). The MC is a airhead and super OP, but in a good way. The side characters have nice and lovable personalities and there is potential character growth~ Which the author is rilly good at! Recommend that you read his other book, it is extremely good~!
this is one of few stories that i keep coming back to no matter how long the wait, even though it's like killing me slowly... . The storyline is good, the characters got personality , the background of the gaming world is at its finest and the real world is like a secondary objective .. VRMMO at its best can't wait for it to update its like forever ..
Dark of night and waxing moon come to us a single pool hear us sing our witches' song and send us moonlight clear and strong Earth and water, wind and fire one and all you must conspire to banish bad for goodness sake cos I need moonshine for my cake Weary travelers long ago shared their bread and made a vow that they will be forever friends and so shall be until time ends
A great and well done story overall! Amusing and interesting MC? Check! Well thought out and diverse side/supporting characters? Check! Interesting story along with great world development? Check! Overpowered MC? Obviously! Can't wait to see more updates! Keep up the good work! P.S. If you all like all of the things above, I'd recommend checking out Epic of Caterpillar. Hehe, obvious advertising? Check! >_<