Good story so far!! I want to ask if you could somehow give more personality to the main character since the story so far is just a sequence of events, which is fine since the story barely started. Good luck!!
I dont like how you try to make Xiao Yan have almost the same as the mc just because of dragon bloodline. Like how strong is a dragon and why is Xiao Yan so weak.
This novel is great so far but I feel sad for you now after web novel banned everyone from reading on PC which makes it even harder for people to find ur story. I will try to read this novel in my free time on myiPhone. Goodluck!!