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Before, it said that its destructiveness was on par with D grade skills, now its E rank?
I love the story, and would be overjoyed if you continued it, but if you’re not sure how to continue it or if you don’t feel like you want to continue it, then don’t. It is entirely up to you if you want to finish it or if you want it to go on an indefinite hiatus or something similar. I will respect your choice, no matter what you decide.
Qie Xieling? What's he doing there?
I forgot... Is Arcadia the world in-game or something?
Is the (Equip) basically asking her to equip it? Or is it saying that it's already equipped. In which case I suggest you add a 'ped' on the end of the (Equip) to change it to (Equipped) and add more clarity. Or it truly is asking her to equip it, in which case I think she's a bit odd to not equip the items. But hey! She can do whatever she wants to!
I think instead of 'forgotten', you should change it to 'lost count of' just for more grammatical sense. Or, at least, I think it would make more grammatical sense. You don't have to change a thing if you don't want to!
The last sentence makes so much sense, now that I'm re-reading!
Thank you!
This is one of the best books I have read. It is funny and relatable and sad all at the same time. The main characters have realistic character progression and their relationship dynamic is so sweet! The way they progress together is just so good! And the trauma they experience is overcome in a realistic way. Honestly, I will never regret reading this story in its entirety and I just wish that there was more content.
Nevermind. It’s that author, right? Can’t believe I forgot!
Who’s Blue again?
But SURELY there’s more I can give you? It’s your Birthday! You can’t just gloss over it! You know what? I’ll try to get my (two) friends to start reading it! Then you’ll have more unlimited support! (No guarantees, what people like cannot be changed, apologies in advance if my plan doesn’t work) And if there’s anything else I can do for you, I will gladly do so! Birthdays matter!