Reviews of Twin Dancer Aura Master
Twin Dancer Aura Master
TheBlackHatMan
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So far it is good and shows a lot of potentials. Though, the author is vague about the MC surrounding like how the room is, how grand the Sect is, or the size of the puppet and rhe MC which is frustrating. I hope you get better at that. Also, please don't add Harem or Romance, it ruins all kinds of Cultivation Novel. I haven't found one with a good romance and it all about the MC being, "I will protect you till my dying breath" or "I will destroy the heavens just to get to you. Romance is annoying, in my opinion. Good luck with the novel. Will like to see the future. For now, here is not rating: 4.6
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A good story all in all. I would add a bit more to spice this story up though. Only a couple of grammar issues, but I won't hold that against you. Honestly, I think that a bit of description of the environment and characters may be useful. I would also try changing the pace just a bit. Spice it up a little more and add a bit of tension.
Great story! Wonderful details about the martial arts that even I don't even know! And great introductions about the struggle to learn such a technique! I hope the mc would become the strongest on the later chapters! Writing quality- there are some crunch words (repeating words) that you might want to avoid such as the word "library" on the first few parts of the chapter and other words. it would be nice if you can find other synonyms about it! Feel free to disagree
