So far it is good and shows a lot of potentials. Though, the author is vague about the MC surrounding like how the room is, how grand the Sect is, or the size of the puppet and rhe MC which is frustrating. I hope you get better at that. Also, please don't add Harem or Romance, it ruins all kinds of Cultivation Novel. I haven't found one with a good romance and it all about the MC being, "I will protect you till my dying breath" or "I will destroy the heavens just to get to you. Romance is annoying, in my opinion. Good luck with the novel. Will like to see the future. For now, here is not rating: 4.6
TheBlackHatMan
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LIKETheBlackHatMan:Thanks for your advice. I will try to do better at describing surroundings. About the sect I will describe it on later chap. And about romance I don't have any plans currently as I also don't like romance that much.