Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in Twin Dancer Aura Master

Great story! Wonderful details about the martial arts that even I don't even know! And great introductions about the struggle to learn such a technique! I hope the mc would become the strongest on the later chapters! Writing quality- there are some crunch words (repeating words) that you might want to avoid such as the word "library" on the first few parts of the chapter and other words. it would be nice if you can find other synonyms about it! Feel free to disagree