Touhou: I Became a Butler of the Scarlet Devil Mansion

I highly recommend this book to any touhou enjoyers. Yes, the mc is male. The story has a friendly cast of characters and unique interactions between the touhou cast and main character. The only thing I think could be better is that the story feels like it has no aim or main conflict. I won't let this affect my rating because I'm only on chapter 8, but I feel like that may add a bit of spice to the story.

I understand why people like it, the naturalness in Diolagar is beautiful, but does everyone have a helpless MC fetish when it comes to making fun of them? Why does she say everything that is done to her is okay? Why does she not want anything more than being Kagya? Sanshi, MC's world is like dusty pink. I felt like I was watching Natsu from Fairy Tail. I hope MC remembers that the world is not pink, there is no such thing as pure good or bad, it is more in shades of grey. I hope the story will unfold in the future. I'm not saying MC should have sexual intercourse with anyone, but the man acts as if he has no libido or pride.

I haven't gave a review in ages but this deserves more recognition/reviews so I granted it one so please don't mind it if my review is pretty meh. P. S. I do wanna clarify this story involves harem even though there's no tag for it although I swear I saw the tag for it before or maybe I'm just delusional. -(The Main Character)- His general information is in his character sheet but it doesn't describe absolutely everything about him like for example, his background gets more in depth at the end of the volume 1 so you won't know everything about him in the very beginning. One thing I will note is he is on a scale of 1 to 10, a 7.5/10 on the dense scale so if you have a low tolerance for dense MCs then please don't hate and kindly move on but if you don't mind that then this read will be very worth. Another thing to note is the mc's abilites are very taxing for him considering his body isn't up to Gensokyo standards yet so he faints/loses consciousness quite often in various fights. He's got the technique, power, speed but is missing the final ingredient which is stamina/endurance but his determination makes it up kinda. -(Story/Plot)- The story is really just about the crazy bizarre butler adventures of Shun in Gensokyo as a human outsider brought in. His influence on Gensokyo, espesically on the residents living there are the main key aspects in my eyes to look at. -(Action)- Lovely action scenes that are largely coherent and should be somewhat easy to imagine. -(Grammar)- The Grammar is very understandable and only has a few mistakes sprinkled in from now and then. -(Update Consistency)- Based on what I spy with my little eyes, this fanfic updates daily but the chapter lengths aren't exactly long which is completely fine since having both daily and long chapters would be asking for way too much. -(Conclusion)- This is my 2nd time reading a Touhou fanfic and I'm not that knowledgeable about Touhou but I quite enjoyed this personally. Also the fact that this is a updating harem Touhou fanfic with a male MC which is very rare, it raises my score. I'll give this a final verdict of 8.9/10 as it fits mostly all my tastes and I hope from the bottom of my heart this doesn't die randomly.

I have red all currently available chapters (75) and as a Touhou Enjoyer, I CAN CONFIRM that this was one of the best things I have ever read. Just feels refreshing to see touhou. If you know the Touhou cast and love Fumos, then this is a must-read! :wisemysticaltree: also my other review still is true and I'll post updates below or something

i am here just to say that sakuya izayoi is the best aswell as the most perfect maid to ever exist

[VOLUME 2]With volume 2, we are greeted by a new cast of characters and a surprising development. Recent chapters show the main character being pushed to grow, which he accepts and takes in stride. On one hand, though, while his recent situation was unexpected, it was not surprising to me. Hopefully, there will be more elements that can make me excited to see these unexpected future developments.The consistent quality and updates are making me quite happy. Chapter has a good length, flows smoothly, and expresses characters in incredible and eloquent ways. I'm falling in love with your setting as you continue to sculpt this world. I don't know if you have been experimenting with the way you've been writing recently or if it's just your experience growing, but the recent chapters have been even better than vol 1. Keep up the great work.

If I were to describe this novel in one word, it would have to be 'redemption'. When I first read the novel, it had about 74 chapters and to describe it, it was... not good. The writing quality was really bad, the action scenes were incoherent and a jumbled mess, and there was a massive issue in a lack of 'show don't tell' causing a general quality level of around 2 stars. However, after the author took a break of around a week or two, the author seemed to take my criticisms and suggestions into consideration, and the quality had massive improvements on all available issues. The writing quality is now a solid 5 stars, the story now has a solid pace 4 star worthy, the character design is still 5 stars, and only updating stability and world background remain at 3 stars. Fantastic comeback, author.

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Thank you for always updating although I'm still on the middle of the chapter it seems I cant catch up due to work! Keep up the work!

I remember this fanfic coming out around when I was making my own, but I did take a short 8 month long break and did not make any chapters. But I return and see that this fanfic has consistently made chapters, If this fanfic has anything. it's the sheer consistency the author has to his work. I reccomend this 👍

This book is quite interesting from the start. In addition we learn a lot more about Shun's character. Although I'm not a fan of basic harems, the plot, the characters and the fights as well as the poignant moments left me on the right track to appreciate it.

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Honestly I was a bit hesitant when I first seen it because it's rare to have touhou fanfic because it always drops or stop updates chapters but I'm glad it hasn't happen I really like this story and mc make me feel like he fits in blood blockade battlefront that how much I like him because blood blockade battlefront is one of my All time favorites and I actually hope the author does put mc In blood blockade battlefront it will be so EPIC