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spectra_phantom
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2023-10-01 07:33

I understand why people like it, the naturalness in Diolagar is beautiful, but does everyone have a helpless MC fetish when it comes to making fun of them? Why does she say everything that is done to her is okay? Why does she not want anything more than being Kagya? Sanshi, MC's world is like dusty pink. I felt like I was watching Natsu from Fairy Tail. I hope MC remembers that the world is not pink, there is no such thing as pure good or bad, it is more in shades of grey. I hope the story will unfold in the future. I'm not saying MC should have sexual intercourse with anyone, but the man acts as if he has no libido or pride.

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spectra_phantom
spectra_phantomLv4

and MC makes me feel like a gazelle on my shroud. Being a housekeeper in a magical world is like a simulator. Sometimes, not to be a shame, the female characters advance the story. The only person in the story who does not contribute to the progress of the story in any way until the part I read is MC. And finally, why is it everyone's sole duty to make fun of MC?

Yamiru
YamiruAuthor

Ahahaha! I get it now! Alright, I'll try to be open up with romance, I understand that you want MC to be at least dominant, right?

Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

hey author question, for the potentially new readers can you answer us if the novels mc ever gets strong enough to do what he wants "that isnt too ridiculous" or does he just stay weak and pathetic. quite a few reviews say so thats why im asking you directly

Yamiru:Ahahaha! I get it now! Alright, I'll try to be open up with romance, I understand that you want MC to be at least dominant, right?
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NO_GUDLv5

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