Daoistmaster
MC is annoying. Have so many cheats and so little limitations that there's a guaranteed lack of tension. Hmm, what else. The grammar isn't good, but it's not exactly bad per say. I really like the idea of Alastor, but the sheer OPness of the MC will certainly make it a bore to read. Development is nonsensical, a God giving him wishes with no limits? Why not make him a Dragon God already? It just doesn't make sense.
it's just another dxd fanfic nothing special mc wishes super op powers go to dxd and then go to kouh town to play with some weak devils even when he is the strongest creature in their world and don't expect anything more than that the author himself said he has a shìtty imagination and this book will be dropped one day just another dxd ff nothing special at this point I really want to make my own ff but sadly I don't have alot of time I don't want to start a fanfic and drop it thats unfair to readers 2 stars for story 3 stars for effort
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Может хватит историй с исполнением желаний... они как правило очень... плохи. Очень плохи! Очень вот вообще вообще! Система это всегда сломанное желание. И если кроме нее есть еще желания можно бросать читать! Если система единственное желание или золотой палец и у нее есть сознание. То тоже можно бросать читать. Если у системы есть магазин тоже можно смело не читать. Когда уже авторы прекратят пережевывать эти шаблоны???
This story is in general a good idea until a whole chapter is just multiple pages of powers copied and pasted from op anime characters that he wished for. He is so immensely strong that he is literally a God but is playing radio demon roll to annoy people. Grammar is ok but the type of writing changes at random making it hard to follow. In general this is a dxd story that try’s to fulfill a 7th graders wet dream.