GaZe_Zero
An addict who can’t stop reading web novels and fanfics. Occasionally writes fanfics. Also I’m lazy and super busy at school so when I write it won’t be often
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So to summarize for peeps, this aint dropped, but it aint continued either. IDK how it will pan out, if I will get any ideas over the summer, but ill let yall know. But! Do expect some other fics to be updated by me! This one just hard as its been so long and idk how I feel about it yet.
Tbh I clicked on this as I like the character and idea, especially because it’s yuri. Main issue is that it’s just not my cup of tea as it’s a heavy system fic with massive progression. It’s not bad, and a lot of people will enjoy it, but I feel like it progresses way too quickly. The mc is getting really OP powers like no tomorrow, where instead there should be some chapters of her just building her current powers. The system is called street level system, but a lot of the people are super OP in their own rights. It’s good just too fast and OP for me.
I’m being honest it’s a great idea, and authors doing great for starting out. Issue is that this just completely neither fits SCP or the Lich. Mc is freely letting the foundation nerf him, and the foundation is acting nothing like it would. The Mc is too naive and doesn’t fit the Lich persona either, I feel like it would’ve been better to have the actual lich of an evil mc fill the role. For the author you gotta remember the Lich persona when writing, and that SCP is prob the most cruel gulag ever. If they found the Lich they would lock him up until the sun blows up, and would never let any reality bender live either.
Good stuff, one will you give Alpha Gungnir armor as he liked to tank? And two with the MACs as an object nears the speed of light it increases in mass, which would make that tungsten shell literally hit with the same force of a small star.