Knossos
I always appreciate a smooth writing experience as aided by the author's skill and this is one of those. The grammar has so far been flawless and other than some very very very slight formatting mistakes that were corrected by the author, I have not picked up any flaw in the writing quality. Plot is interesting and has a lot of potential. The character(s)is well-written and developped. The world background hasn't been brought up too much yet but I predict it will also be 5 stars from me. Good work, keep it up!
The chapters are really long, like really2x long. Praise be the book cover! I like it. Anyways, the author was good at choosing words and it was like a play. I must say that the mastery of the language is one of his perks. I can see that the narration was smooth. I like it ❤️ Hope you can make the chapters thinner like 1.5k words as an average per chap haha 😂 Anyways, still up to you. The readers need a short break per chap too ❤️
Though I don't normally read system stories, this one was quite good. There was an energetic feel in the words as they properly describe each scenario and gave proper justice to the intriguing characters. From the first line I was hooked and kept reading. My only question is- can the system be made more inclusive and realistic in the story. I mean, I haven't much experience in system type stories, but I think those parts seemed a bit too artificial. (Just my humble opinion, what I felt while reading the story.) This doesn't have to be necessarily the case for everyone. Anyways, good-luck with this story author. I'll return once there are more chapters.
It's superb! I honestly didn't see some scenes coming(I won't specifically point to avoid spoilers)! The novel had surprising, thrilling and exciting elements that while you're reading, you'd feel as though you're sitting on the edge. I also love how relatable the characters can be even if this is a fantasy genre. Overall, marvelous so keep it up!