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star_dreamer

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An avid reader. Interested in learning and growing and following the star shining for me. I would be eternally grateful if you give any of my stories a chance.

2020-08-01 JoinedGlobal
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Replied to Phia_Williams_8100

    Thank you so much <3<3 I know it's been long, but I am not discontinuing this story. Just working on making it better, and promise I'll update soon!

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    Once Upon A Veela
    Book&Literature · star_dreamer
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Replied to _hestia_

    Thank you!

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    Lovingly together
    Urban · star_dreamer
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Commented

    It's fine tho, cause those are the exact reasons we love you! Princess Neoma!

    [I aspire to be as well-loved as my Mama Boss. Although that might be impossible since I have a bad temper and a foul mouth. Plus, I'm very vain. Only odd people like Lewis could tolerate a person as vain as me. In short, I'm too high-maintenance and most people can't handle that.]
    altalt
    Royal Secret: I'm a Princess!
    Fantasy · sola_cola
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Posted

    First, great summary. Really struck a chord in my heartstrings. The story is amazing! It's got a very detailed science fiction feel, makes it quite interesting to read cause the detailing is not too much, not too less- just right. The conversations are good and realistic and scenes change smoothly. Good job author!

    altalt
    Forsaken's Redemption
    Sci-fi · ariam_N_M
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Posted

    Interesting story with a well thought out plot. Seems like one with full-on adventure and romance. The prince and princess are interesting characters to get to know, and I look forward to learning more about their journey of falling in love. Good luck author!

    altalt
    无效的
    Fantasy · _hestia_
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Posted

    I think this is a legendary story. Flawless writing, details aptly described and made to understand easily. The plot moves smoothly and seems to be very interesting from what I understand after reading as far as I have. If you've stumbled upon this story and wonder if you should read it, then, yes. Do give it a try, you'll like it. Great job author!

    altalt
    Rightful Vengeance
    Fantasy · Samantha_R_Samuel
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Posted

    The writing in this story is fine, and readability is good enough for readers to follow the story. I think the plot is different and there are good, intriguing characters in this story. It's a good read if you feel attracted to the story by the synopsis. Good job author. You've done great!

    altalt
    My Time System
    Fantasy · Itsuki_Suzuki
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Commented

    She played you like ping pong brother!

    Seeing that, Nian Junting suddenly felt delighted. He turned his thin lips up, but failed to notice the faint smile which flashed across Luosang's face.
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    Growing Fond of You, Mr Nian
    Urban · Leaf Snow
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Posted

    What an epic story! It's well-written, aptly descriptive, the plot is so engaging that once I started reading, I stopped only when the chapters finished. The flow from one scene to the other is a smooth transition. And the characters' emotions have been well-captured. Author, do update soon!

    altalt
    Carla: The Chosen One
    History · Deby_Gold
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Posted

    This story has a solid, good plot that becomes increasingly intriguing as you read on. Magic and mystery- have been combined amazingly well. Read to join the characters on their fantastic journey. Good-luck author with your wonderful story!

    altalt
    The Isle of Guardians
    Fantasy · d_nmalory
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Commented

    This part and the next para seem incomplete to me. Please edit these parts a bit author.

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    The Isle of Guardians
    Fantasy · d_nmalory
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Posted

    Welps! This story is so mysterious and intriguing. The plot is so unique and engaging. The writing is realistic and hilarious at times. Definitely a good read, do try it! Kudos author, for a job well done!

    altalt
    GREASE
    Fantasy · halfblinde
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Posted

    The story is so lively. The mention of pandemic reminded me of our situation. TAKE CARE EVERYBODY! Alright, so this story is a transmigration story where the Lead goes to a magical world after death in her previous one. That's pretty common. But, the author's plot sure seems not. So read it to find out what's new and different. It's a very engaging story with great potential. Good luck author!

    altalt
    The Ultimate Priest System
    Fantasy · Temis
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Commented

    What is with these boys and their urge to bully someone to grab their attention?!!

    "Hmph! Who wants to be friends with her?" Although an arrogant expression crossed Han Siye's face, he kept shooting glances at Su Jiu. She's so tiny like a doll. I feel an urge to… bully her.
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    I Become A Burdensome Child After Transmigrating
    General · Biting Peaches
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Replied to Chase_Xavier_123

    I understand. No worries, I didn't take it badly or negatively. Was just curious. Thanks for sharing.

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    Lovingly together
    Urban · star_dreamer
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Posted

    This is seriously very different from the usual system type stories that I have tried before. The MC is exactly how the author described him in the summary- self-centered and a narcissist. Author has great sense of humor, that's for sure. Every chapter will leave an uncontrollable tickle in your tummy. I wonder if and how the MC will gain his handsomeness back, which he was so sad to lose. Good luck with this story author! (The large amount of swearing in this story did make me uncomfortable and it also felt a bit much, like it was appearing so many times it began seeming unnecessary. If possible please try to be more innovative regarding this aspect author. I do understand it's part of MC's personality trait but still I personally feel it can be made better.)

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    Evolution to GOD
    Urban · REaper
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Replied to Chase_Xavier_123

    May I ask why? It's not a problem or anything, just am curious as to what made you think that.

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    Lovingly together
    Urban · star_dreamer
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Posted

    I must say, this novel is different. There's a new concept here, a very well-thought plot and magnificent writing. If you like supernatural, mana mage story you should try this one. You might like it. The summary is quite good, and the cover is spectacular. Author has provided with an excellent story which certainly deserves more attention. Great story!

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    Death, Devotion, Dissonance
    Fantasy · NakedApron
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Replied to Crown_of_Flame

    Thank you very much!

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    Lovingly together
    Urban · star_dreamer
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  • star_dreamer
    star_dreamer2yr
    Replied to NakedApron

    Thank you for the amazing review, and I'll take careful note of the mistakes you pointed. I really missed them. I am glad you liked this story. Your words really mean a lot. The change in POVs is because I am not writing from characters point of view but from mine, a third person's to retain the mystery and show how the characters are and how the plot unfolds instead of telling. I hope I am managing to do a fine job, don't really know cause I am a real amateur. POVs are hard to decide. Thank you for reading!

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    Lovingly together
    Urban · star_dreamer
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