The personalities of the main characters are done really, really well, and I can't help but to be invested because of the dynamicness of the characters.
This book, if edited to make the writing feel more complete, would be an absolute ride to read. No doubt about it. The development is really balanced and nice.
The writing quality is really good, I do have to say. The plot, there isn't much to really say so far being we only have five chapters right now, but I suspect there will be an exciting growth because of this.
First starts this very moody feeling that just gets you in an odd way, once that I didn't expect to exactly feel. It's weird. Super weird, and I love it.
Editing is remarkable in this book. Like, surprising. I'm not sure if I can remember a single grammar mistake. If you want some good writing quality, this is the place.
The story does enough to get your interest, with fine writing quality and a plot that doesn't get you confused at the least. What I would suggest is getting a nice cover to go along with the book.
The way the setting is described is very well done, instantly grabbing your attention as you continue reading, and being the fairly new stage that its in, I can only hope it grows to be even better.