Review Detail of star_dreamer in The Superpower System

Though I don't normally read system stories, this one was quite good. There was an energetic feel in the words as they properly describe each scenario and gave proper justice to the intriguing characters. From the first line I was hooked and kept reading. My only question is- can the system be made more inclusive and realistic in the story. I mean, I haven't much experience in system type stories, but I think those parts seemed a bit too artificial. (Just my humble opinion, what I felt while reading the story.) This doesn't have to be necessarily the case for everyone. Anyways, good-luck with this story author. I'll return once there are more chapters.