That was a good comparison though I haven't watched it. Looks like a nice show! Reminded me of Battle Royale

Thanks for the comments and of course for reading :) haha yeah it could be quite gruesome. Hope you enjoy reading it!

Brutal scene ahead. If you want to skip, find 'the video ended there' paragraph below.

Gruesome scene incoming. If you want to skip, find the 'the video ended there' section

An enjoyable first chapter. Good dialogue, interesting story and easy to understand. The long chapter was unexpected because of the short prologue.

Other than some punctuation misses, the story is easy enough to follow. The first person POV brings us closer to the MC. Keep on the good work!

Good first chapter. Easy to read. Nice story. Keep up the good work! [img=recommend]

Some writing & punctuation mistakes but a good start nonetheless

Thanks for the review =)

Other than some writing mistakes, overall this is a well-written story. The cultivation is unique and not cliches. Boy, the first chapter is huge (and full on action!) but I guess it is necessary to set up the background story. Overall, I really enjoy it. Looking forward to reading it more!

but he already purchased T1 regen above ..

Have to say I didn't expect he to do his neighbors in. But they indeed deserve it.

Not meaning to be a grammar police, but you missed the capital letter in the first sentence here..

My boss is my bully.. they're all the same

Sh*tty life indeed

Thank you for the review :D I admit it is indeed not an easy read. I will make sure to put warning ahead of the gory scenes.

Will rewrite this section with new victim and new scene soon..

Will rewrite this whole section soon.. You can opt to skip it and return later

OP? Do you mean MC? If yes, by this chapter not much yet

A compulsory self-review by the author ;D Thank you for reading my first story. If you like what you are reading, please consider supporting 'Guropeji'. I will do my best to create interesting plotlines and keep on updating the chapters. *bow head