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I like the character of Ayden Williams. It would be great to describe right in the beginning chapter how does it feel to transform into spirit form. It would give a feel of the entire story and the struggles of the character. Also, I personally enjoyed his sarcastic humour. It's a good book with a unique writing style. Great job. [img=recommended]

Great story. Good description, easy read, solid world-building, and better description than most Webnovel stories. Very well done, but I feel this one is just short of 5 stars. Why? I think it needs a little more of two things. Tension and dialogue. Tension doesn't mean people have to die or get hurt. Not necessarily. Maybe people have intense arguments. Perhaps a storm happen. Perhaps it's created by how you write the story. Maybe it's romantic tension. But I need to feel something just a little more, gripping. I'd also like to see a bit more dialogue here to make the characters feel a bit more real. To make it feel like I know them a little better. Some chapters seem to have a lapse in dialogue.

It is a very unique story. I love the backstory. I haven’t ever seen a story like this. It is very unique. I like the sequence of chapters, it seems confusing. Highly recommendation I will wait for more chapters.

It's a very engaging novel, Characters are well written. The plot is interesting it's written in the way people get hooked once they read the novel.

Here is the five star rating for this awesome book. Well designed characters, nicely explained world background and good writing quality. It felt like i was watching a movie while reading this book. Guys, go ahead and take a look, you will love this one! My best wishes to the author

I really love this book! The gripping action and dialogue, tight pacing, wonderful characterization and foreshadowing have me hooked! I cannot wait to read more, and the updates are really original!

Overall, the story is quite nice. The world is pretty cool and the writing quality is readable, but the whole 'choosing between friends versus the rest of the world' thing feels kind of cliche to me. Who knows though? Maybe the author can pull off a unique spin on it. I have confidence!

The synopsis sounded really interesting. The book starts out very emotional, you immediately feel for the main character and wish you could help. But then everything changes... But is it for the better? The story hooked me in for a hot second and I had to force myself to stop reading. So I guess that's a good sign. :D My only negative critique is that the characters could use some more depth and sometimes the pacing is a bit off. Overall, great book and keep up the good work!

Loved this story. It is interesting and keeps you hooked. I love to continue reading the story, I would love to read more. I would also like to thank the author for introducing us to such a beautifully designed world.

I love this book it's really great compared to some of the books I have read.I really hope the author gets more ideas to write books like this and get really famous and even get an award

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