I like the character of Ayden Williams. It would be great to describe right in the beginning chapter how does it feel to transform into spirit form. It would give a feel of the entire story and the struggles of the character. Also, I personally enjoyed his sarcastic humour. It's a good book with a unique writing style. Great job. [img=recommended]
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